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The Japanese wonderful things I think I love Japan. I am happy to be born as a Japanese. There are four seasons and a lot of nature, a lot of hot springs, good foods, long histories and cultures in Japan. My hometown have mountains and rivers, sea(=pacific ocean). In the spring we have a cherry - blossom viewing. In the summer we swim in a sea and do BBQ on the beach. Some people climb mountains. In the autumn we go see autumn leaves. It is very beautiful. In the winter we play ski (snowboard). Additionally we can enjoy seasonal foods (seasonal fishes and vegetables). I like eating very much. And personally I like Kimono. Kimono is a Japanese traditional costume. I am learning how to wear Kimono.It is interesting. I would like to introduce about Japan and Japanese cultures to foreigners in English.

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The Japanese wonderful things I think  Wonderful things I like about Japan/What I feel is wonderful about Japan/

I love Japan. I am happy to be born as a Japanese. There are four seasons and a lot of nature, a lot of hot springs, good foods, long histories and unique cultures in Japan. My hometown have has mountains, and rivers and the sea(=pacific ocean). In the spring, we have a cherry-blossom viewing. In the summer we swim in a the sea and do BBQ barbecue on the beach. Some people climb mountains. In the autumn we go see the autumn leaves. It is very beautiful. In the winter we play ski and snowboard.
Additionally, we can enjoy seasonal foods such as seasonal fishes and vegetables. I like eating very much.
And personally, I like Kimono. Kimono is a Japanese traditional costume. I am learning how to wear Kimono. It is interesting.
I would like to introduce about Japan and Japanese cultures to foreigners in English.


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Usually, we use "the XXX" to refer to something specific. For example if John has an apple, or if there are many apples and one of the apple is rotten.
"John has an apple in his bag. The apple (John's apple) is red."
"There are many apples. One of them is rotten. The (rotten) apple was thrown away."

Regarding "sea", we usually use "the sea" because we know there is only one sea near us.
"We will swim in the sea for our marathon training next week."
"He likes to swim in the sea."

We will use "a sea" if we don't know that it exist. Maybe you are on a trip and you found out there is a sea unexpectedly.
"Oh, there is a sea! I didn't know that."

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The Japanese wonderful things I think What I think is wonderful about Japan

I love Japan. I am happy to be born as a Japanese. There are four seasons and a lot of natural landscapes, a lot of hot springs, good foods, long histories and cultures in Japan. My hometown have has (<--"My hometown" is singular.) mountains and rivers and borders the sea (Pacific Ocean). In the spring, we have a cherry-blossom viewing. In the summer, we swim in a the sea and do BBQ barbecue on the beach, while some people climb mountains. In the autumn, we go see the autumn leaves, It is which are very beautiful. In the winter, we play ski and snowboard.
Additionally, we can enjoy seasonal foods (seasonal fishes and vegetables). I like eating very much.
And I also personally I like the kimono, Kimono is a traditional Japanese traditional (<--Be aware of English's adjective order rules.) costume. I am learning how to wear the kimono, and it is interesting.
I would like to introduce about Japan and Japanese cultures to foreigners in English.

You've done well introducing us to Japan so far, Mari. Keep up the good work!

Here is a link describing English's adjective order rules: https://dictionary.cambridge.org/us/grammar/british-grammar/about-adjectives-and-adverbs/adjectives-order

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