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Hi Anastasia! Thank you for submitting this notebook entry. Below is your text with my corrections. At the bottom, I have explained them in more detail for you. I hope this helps, if there is anything else, let me know!
Is it important to see eye to eye with your friends? Interesting subject! I also think it's very good that you used the expression 'seeing eye to eye', it shows that you're an advanced English speaker and you can understand figurative speech as well.
*Whom/whose. 'Whose' refers to possession, for example: "Whose book is that?" 'Whom' is the correct choice in this sentence. I added another 'with whom' between brackets, because the sentence may be easier to read if you repeat the object.
*In/on. The verb 'to agree' is used with 'on'.
*The/a/an/nothing. 'the' is used when you mean a specific thing. For example: 'Did you see the hotel at the end of the street?' If you don't mean a specific thing, you can use 'a/an', for example: 'My brother is a doctor' or 'I saw an elephant' and if you refer to multiple things that are not specific, you use nothing. In this sentence, you mean all subjects, so multiple things that are not specific.
*Indirect speech. In the last sentence, you give a person advice on what they should think about. You wan them to think: 'Why is this person my friend?' This is direct speech. In this sentence, however, you use indirect speech, so instead of 'my', you use 'your'. The person is not your friend, but your reader's friend.
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