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(about me) I don't know how I say it in japonese こんにちは! わたし は メンデス ヂエゴ です。 はじめまして。 ぼく は 19 さい です。 ブラジル出身です。ぼく は ねこといぬ を もっています。(I love animals)

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(about me) I don't know how I say it in japonese

こんにちは!はじめまして。わたしはメンデス・ヂエゴです。わたしは19歳です。ブラジル出身です。わたしは猫と犬を飼(か)っています。動物が好きです。

1. There is no space in Japanese. You should not leave any space within a sentence nor between sentences.

2. Words for animals are usually written in Katakana (cats and dogs: katakana or kanji), so that there is fewer Hiragana to make it more readable.

3. If you have decided to use わたし in the first sentence, then better stick to it, since you don't simply be so acquainted with the one you are speaking to in just one sentence of self-introduction.


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I love animals.= ぼくは動物(どうぶつ)がだいすきです。 ねこといぬを飼(か)っています。is more natural than ねこといぬをもっています。 You did good job. I translated and adviced above. Hopes this helps you.

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