Summer Hello, Today I would like to write about my summer. This summer is different to me because this summer I have had to work every day, this summer I have not holidays.... Fortunately I live in a

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Javier

Summer Hello, Today I would like to write about my summer. This summer is different to me because this summer I have had to work every day, this summer I have not holidays.... Fortunately I live in a small town in the spanish coast. I usually finish to work at two clock and I can enjoy in the swimming pool or the beach every afternoon. But I have to make a confession, my favourite moment in the day is the evening in the terraces.I like refresh me with a cold beer and enjoying of a good food in the night seeing the light of the moon. I think that I have a good live, by the way in September I start my holidays. [emoji][emoji][emoji][emoji]

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Summer

Hello! Today I would like to write about my summer. This summer is different for me because this summer I have had to work every day. This summer I have no holidays.... Fortunately, I live in a small town on the Spanish coast. I usually finish to work at two clock and I can enjoy in the swimming pool or the beach every afternoon. But I have to make a confession, my favorite moment of the day is the evening on the terrace.I like to have a refreshing cold beer and enjoy good food late in the evening looking at the moon (or by the moon light). I think, that I have a good live. By the way in September, I start my holidays.

Summer

Hello, today I would like to write about my summer. This summer is different for me because I have had to work every day, this summer I have not had any holidays.... Fortunately I live in a small town on the Spanish coast. I usually finish work at two o'clock and I can enjoy the swimming pool or the beach every afternoon. But I have to make a confession, my favourite moment in the day is the evening on the terraces. I like to refresh myself with a cold beer and enjoy a good meal in the light of the moon. I think that I have a good life.

By the way I start my holidays in September . [emoji][emoji][emoji][emoji]

Hello Javier,

Nice text which was fully understandable. Just a few small corrections.

Best wishes

Bob

Summer

Hello, today I would like to write about my summer. This summer is different to me because this summer I have had to work every day. This summer I have not had holidays.... Fortunately I live in a small town on the Spanish coast. I usually finish to work working at two clock and I can enjoy being/swimming in the swimming pool (OR, I can enjoy the swimming pool) or the beach every afternoon. But I have to make a confession, my favourite moment in the day is the evening in on the terraces. I like to refresh me myself with a cold beer and enjoying enjoy of a good food in the at night seeing the light of the moon. I think that I have a good live life. By the way, in September I start my holidays. [emoji][emoji][emoji][emoji]

Nice story. I like that you said that you have a good life. As human beings, it's difficult to be satisfied with our lives, as we seem to be always wanting more. More money, more things, more time to travel, etc. I like your antidote about drinking a cold beer at night with the light of the moon. It's nice to appreciate these moments.

Summer

Hello, today I would like to write about my summer. This summer is different to me because this summer I have had to work every day, this summer I have not and do not have any holidays. Fortunately I live in a small town in on the Spanish coast. I usually finish to work at two o'clock and I can enjoy in the swimming in the pool or go to the beach every afternoon. But I have to make a confession, my favourite moment in the day are the evenings in on the terraces. I like to refresh me myself with a cold beer and enjoying of a good food in during the night while seeing watching the light of the moon. I think that I have a good live life. By the way, in September I start my holidays. [emoji][emoji][emoji][emoji]

Very good work, Javier. Your level of English is outstanding. There are only a few small corrections, but you are able to communicate your ideas well and any native English speaker will be able to understand. Keep the writings coming. The culture of reading and writing is what makes life rich.

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