Corrections · 2
Series
Until now, I had seen four (<--Whole numbers less than 100 should be frequently written as words.) series, two of them are many very popular between my friends. But However, I (<--Although it's not a rule, it's best not to start sentences with conjunctions.) didn't like them. did you Could guess which ones? I will tell you better and explain my reason too. The first one is Breaking Bad, which I didn't like it because its (<--"It's" is short for "it is," while "its" is the possessive word.) plot is slow, and at finally I didn't see at (<--There is no personal "a" in English, so be careful not to translate the "a" into anything.) Carlson like as a bad character until I will see like saw Malcolm's father. The other series is The Walking Dead; there are too many zombies. Sorry to the fans of the two of series mentioned.
Not bad, Alejandra. I don't know about either series, so I cannot comment on your accuracy, but I hope my corrections and notes help. Please let me know if you have any questions. ¡Saludos!
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