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I'm a college student I'm a college student in China who are majoring in economics.I'm also interested in American culture and education,and now I am preparing for the test of Master degree candidate.I wish I could go to America after several years to be acquainted with the country ,I'm very glad to communicate with people who are open and clear.by the way,I also can make you know more about China.(^ ^)

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I'm a College Student

I'm a college student in China who is majoring in economics. Presently, I am preparing to test as a master's degree candidate.* I'm also interested in American culture and education. In the future, I would like to go to America to become acquainted with the country and its people, and towards that goal, I would be very glad to communicate with people from there who are open and inviting. By the way, I can also help you to learn more about China. (^ ^)

Hi. Good job! I reworded and rearranged your sentences to allow them to "flow," as well as sound, more natural to my native ears, but easily understood everything you wanted to tell me as the reader. While the others showed you their corrections within their posted text, I took the liberty of explaining it below, along with a few other comments. Best of luck with your testing and in your future studies! I hope that this helps you. J. (Sorry to all re the font size!)

The main or important words of your title should be capitalized.
The word "student" needs a singular verb (is), not a plural one (are). [Subject- verb agreement]
The word "economics" is not capitalized when used in this context.
A space is required after a period (.) and a comma (,).
The degree is a "master's," not a "master." (And use lower case when referring to it in a general manner, but use capitalization and omit the possessive when identifying your specific degree as in a Master of Science in Biology)
*Apologies, but I will let someone else, someone with more definite knowledge of it, suggest a better way to phrase this since to me, your sentence is a bit confusing. On the one hand, you stated that  your major is economics, so that suggests you do not yet have a BA or BS degree? Yet, you then write that you are preparing to test as a master's candidate, which implies that you are already in a master's program? Furthermore, by using the word "candidate," it reflects that you are writing your thesis and preparing to defend. Perhaps, you simply meant that you will graduate with your BA or BS soon, and are applying to get into a master's program? If so, you should just state that as clarity and conciseness are the signs of a good writer. 



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I'm a college student

I'm a college student in China who is majoring in Economics.I'm also interested in the American culture and education,and Now, I am preparing to take a Master's degree candidate test.I wish I could go to America for several years to become acquainted with the country. I'm very glad I can communicate with people who are open and clear. By the way, I can also let you know more about China.(^ ^)
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I'm a college student

I'm a college student in China who are is majoring in economics. I'm also interested in American culture and education, and now I am preparing for the test of Master's degree candidate test. I wish I could go to America after several years to be acquainted with the country. I'm very glad happy to communicate with people who are open and clear. By the way, I also can make teach you know (<--"Make you know" 是 ”逼着你懂“ 的意思。) more about China. (^ ^)

写得好，乱码12345摩羯。希望你能考成功，哪天来到美国 =)

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I'm a college student

I'm a college student in China who is majoring in Economics. I'm also interested in American culture and education. Now, I am preparing for the Master's degree candidate test. I wish I could go to America after several years to become acquainted with the country. I'm very glad to communicate with people who are open and clear. By the way, I can also help you learn more about China.(^ ^)

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