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五月四号的日记

我跟我的中国朋友有一点论争。在英文里（上），讨论英文翻译的时候（把英文的翻译讨论的时候），我经常用"awkward"这个词。我查了这个词，然后找到了“蹇拙”（我查找这个词和我找到”蹇拙“）。我的朋友说这个词很奇怪。她说这个词几乎不说。她建议别的词。”尴尬“”奇怪“和"笨拙”。可是我说“尴尬”还有别的意思是“不好意思”。这个意思不是我用"awkward"的意思。而且“奇怪”是一点“少见”的意思和"奇“和诡异的意思。”红色的大象（红的象）很奇怪“我说（说我）。再说”笨拙“有意思是愚蠢，笨。可是”蹇拙“只有（有只）我的意思。再说”蹇拙“是讨论写作时用的（意图说对写文）。她提出”别扭“.这个词还不错（）这是很好。可是我还觉得“蹇拙”比“别扭”好。巧的是，（偶然）我想表达的意思是有一点“不方便”和“难懂”，还有一点“不文雅” （这个意思我想表达是一点“不方便”和“了解得不容易”和“一点”俗气“”不文雅“）可是不“低俗”。

关于awkward这个词，中文里没有意思一样的词。在谈论写作的时候，我们可能会说“不通顺”“不恰当”，要看是什么样的错误。”蹇拙“真的很少用，我是第一次见到。

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五月四号的日记

我跟我的中国朋友有一点论争。在英文上把英文的翻译讨论的时候，我经常用"awkward"。我查找这个词和我找到”蹇拙“。我的朋友说这个词很奇怪。她说这个词几乎不说。她建议别的词。”尴尬“”奇怪“和"笨拙”。可是我说“尴尬”还有别的意思是“不好意思”。这个意思不是我用"awkward"的意思。而且“奇怪”是一点“少见”的意思和"奇“和诡异的意思。”红的象很奇怪“说我。再说”笨拙“有意思是愚蠢，笨。可是”蹇拙“有只我的意思。再说”蹇拙“意图说对写文。她提出”别扭“.这是很好。可是我还觉得“蹇拙”比“别扭”好。偶然这个意思我想表达是一点“不方便”和“了解得不容易”和“一点”俗气“”不文雅“可是不“低俗”。

My Chinese friend and I had a small disagreement. In English, when talking about English translations, I like to use the word "awkward". I looked the word up and found "蹇拙”. My friend said that this word was very strange/rare. She said this word is almost never spoken. She proposed some other words 尴尬， 奇怪， and 笨拙。 But I said that 尴尬 also had another meaning of "embarrased". This meaning was not what I meant in using "awkward". And 奇怪 is a little but like "rare" or "strange" "A red elephant is strange" I said. And then 笨拙 has the meaning of "stupid" which I do not intend. But 蹇拙 has only the meaning I want. Moreover, the word 蹇拙 is intended for use in talking about writing. She suggested 别扭. This word is okay. But I still feel 蹇拙 is better. Incidentally, the meaning I wanted to express was a little bit like "inconvenient" and a little bit like "hard to understand" and a little bit "inelegant","inelegant", but not "vulgar".

五月四号的日记

我跟我的中国朋友有一点论争。（在英语世界里）在英文上，把（讨论）英文的翻译讨论的时候，我经常用"awkward"。我查找这个词（时）和我找到”蹇拙“。我的朋友说这个词很奇怪。她说这个词几乎不说。她建议（用）别的词：”尴尬“、”奇怪“和"笨拙”。可是我说“尴尬”还有别的意思，是“不好意思”（的意思）。这个意思不是我用"awkward"的意思。而且“奇怪”（有）是一点“少见”的意思，和"奇“和诡异的意思。”红（色）的（大）象很奇怪“说我(说)。再说”笨拙“有（个）意思是愚蠢，笨。可是”蹇拙“有只（有）我的意思。再说”蹇拙“（本来）意图（就是用于书面写作）说对写文。她提出”别扭“.这是很好。可是我还觉得“蹇拙”比“别扭”好。（碰巧/偏巧）偶然这个意思我想表达（的这个意思）是一点“不方便”，“了解得不容易”和“一点”俗气“、不文雅，可（不）是不“低俗”。

My Chinese friend and I had a small disagreement. In English, when talking about English translations, I like to use the word "awkward". I looked the word up and found "蹇拙”. My friend said that this word was very strange/rare. She said this word is almost never spoken. She proposed some other words 尴尬， 奇怪， and 笨拙。 But I said that 尴尬 also had another meaning of "embarrased". This meaning was not what I meant in using "awkward". And 奇怪 is a little but like "rare" or "strange" "A red elephant is strange" I said. And then 笨拙 has the meaning of "stupid" which I do not intend. But 蹇拙 has only the meaning I want. Moreover, the word 蹇拙 is intended for use in talking about writing. She suggested 别扭. This word is okay. But I still feel 蹇拙 is better. Incidentally, the meaning I wanted to express was a little bit like "inconvenient" and a little bit like "hard to understand" and a little bit "inelegant","inelegant", but not "vulgar".