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学习外语中遇到的人 10 - the last part....thx everyone for your help! 遇到上面描述的人,我不仅分析别人的行为,但是也不断地观察和分析我自己的反应。这个过程及辛苦,又有意思。假设我是独裁者,我会领命每个人在国外学一个跟母语完全不同的语言,让大家学习心理学,让大家提高沟通能力,让大家体会外语的魅力而且顺便让大家从井底跳出来。

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学习外语中遇到的人 10 - the last part....thx everyone for your help!

遇到上面描述的那种人后,我不仅分析了别人的行为,但是而且/还也不断地观察和分析我自己的反应。这个过程及极其(extremely?)辛苦,又但很有意思。(you can also say 又辛苦,又有意思, 又。。。又 is the equivalent of as well as in english,so you need two parts to be compatible,辛苦and有意思 are not quite compatible so maybe you can change the words if that's the logic you are following)假设我是独裁者,我会领命命令每个人在国外学一个跟自己母语完全不同的语言,让大家学习心理学,让大家并提高沟通能力,这样( if this 让 is not a parallel part of the action, you need 这样 to indicate the purpose of your previous action )才能让大家体会真正(optional)外语的魅力,而且顺便让大家扩大视野从井底跳出来(I know you are referring to the phrase井底之蛙, but Chinese doesn't really work in this way)。


Some parts are difficult to correct because they can be written in different ways depends on what you really want to say.

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Dear : The conjunction you uesd in Chines was very appropriate, and you even can ues idiom, it is such a progress compared with other learns . :)
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学习外语中遇到的人 10 - the last part....thx everyone for your help!

遇到上面描述的人,

我不仅分析别人的行为,但是也不断地观察和分析我自己的反应。(我不仅分析别人的行为,而且但是也不断地观察和分析我自己的反应。)(NOTE 1: 不仅...而且... (not only... but also...))

这个过程及辛苦,又有意思。(NOTE 2 : 极其 (extremely, very )

假设我是独裁者,我会领命每个人在国外学一个跟母语完全不同的语言,(NOTE 3: Chinese are used to say as" 一门外语“ or ”一种外语“)

让大家学习心理学,让大家提高沟通能力,

让大家体会外语的魅力而且顺便让大家从井底跳出来。(NOTE 4: 井底之蛙(A person who is shortsighted), we use "井底之蛙" to describe someone who is shortsighted, EG:   他犹如井底之蛙, He is a person who  shortsighted / He is a shortsighted person.)( Do you mean: I want others to feel the charm of foreign language and broaden their horizon at the same time?  So it could be: 让大家体会外语的魅力而且同时开阔大家的眼界(NOTE 5: 开阔眼界:broaden one's horizon, broad one's views)


Dear : The conjunction you uesd in Chines was very appropriate, and you even can ues idiom, it is such a progress compared with other learns . :)

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学习外语中遇到的人 10 - the last part....thx everyone for your help!

遇到「上面/以上」描述的人过后,(我对此事有了感想),我不仅观察和分析别人的行为,也不断地观察和分析我自己的反应。这个过程虽辛苦,又有意思。假设我是独裁者,我「会推荐/规定/命令」每个人在国外学一个跟母语无关的语言,让大家学习心理学并提高沟通能力,这样大家才能真正欣赏外语的魅力以及增广见闻。

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