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TV shows negatively impact on children. Another reason to consider television's outcome as detrimental for children is that they copy the behaviour observed without analysing it. For example, sponge bob popularity has caused to toddlers talking like him, which it can be seen as unfavourable behaviour as this character has an immature voice and is aggressive towards friends. Therefore, this repetition of attitude develop violence and immaturity, which are unfavourable for the juvenile's upbringing.

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TV shows negatively impact on children.

Another reason to consider television's outcome as detrimental for children is that they the latter (<--Be clear who/what this "they" refers to.) copy the behaviour observed without analysing it. For example, Sponge Bob's popularity has caused to toddlers to talking like him, which it can be seen as unfavourable behaviour as this character has an immature voice and is aggressive towards friends. Therefore, this repetition of attitude develops violence and immaturity, which are unfavourable for the juvenile's upbringing.

Nicely written, Karina. Please let me know if you have any questions =)

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TV shows negatively impact on children.   si usas "impact" como verbo, no es correcto decir "on".  Puedes decir: "TV shows' negative impact on children" aqui "impact" es substantivo

Another reason to consider television's outcome as detrimental for children is that they copy the behaviour observed without analysing it. For example, Sponge Bob's popularity has caused toddlers to talk like him, which it can be seen as unfavourable behaviour as this character has an immature voice and is aggressive towards (his) friends. Therefore, the concern is that exposure to this type of attitude encourages violence and immaturity, which are unfavourable for the juvenile's upbringing.
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TV negatively impacts children. (correcto, impact como verbo) TV has a negative impact on children. (correcto, impact como substantivo) la clave de usar "impact" correctamente es saber si usas como verbo o substantivo.

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