My mother

I want to talk about my mother.

She is a careful and positive woman who works as a mathematics (math would work, too) teacher in a public elementary school. She works very hard and is very detailed. Although she has encountered many difficulties during this these years ,she have has the ability to deal with this problems them one by one with many patience  patiently.

She has never complicated complained about what she had met is faced with .She prefers to share her experiences and teached taught me how to solve a problem when I was a child. I have learned a lot from her advice. In Thanks to her education, I have become an independent person and I know how to control my own life more easily .    I changed it to complained because it seemed given the topic of the paragraph being your mom sharing experiences and using them to help teach you, "complained" seemed to fit. If that's not what you meant, please let me know. :)

She is the most important people person in my life. She has given me a loving family and teach has taught me how to become a better person. With my mother's emotional support, I have much a lot of confidence and a healthful healthy attitude to face my life. I really love my mother.

Nice work!

My mother

I want to talk about my mother.

She is a careful and positive woman who works as a mathematics (<--"Math" 可以是单数词，但是 "mathematics" 永远是复数词。) teacher in at a public elementary school. She works very hard and is very detailed. Though she has encountered many difficulties during this these years, she have has the ability to deal with this these problems one by one with many much patience. (<--可以数的东西用 "many"，数不出来的东西用 "much"。)

She never complicated what she had met experienced. She prefers to share her experiences and teached taught me how to solve a problem when I was a child. I learn a lot from her advices. In Through her education, I become an independent person, and I know how to control my own life more easily.

She is the most important people person in my life. She give me a loving family, and teach taught me how to become a better person. With my mother's emotional support, I have much confidence and a healthy attitude to face live my life. I really love my mother.

写得好，Yuan！请注意英文的时态和标点符号规则。动词要跟时态配合。逗号和句号的空格在标点符号的后面，不在前面。有问题请别怕问。

Your mother sounds like an extraordinary person. You are very blessed to have her =)

My mother

I want to talk about my mother.

She is a careful and positive woman who works as a mathematics teacher in a public elementary school. She works very hard and detailed ('hard' and 'detailed' are not parallel, some rephrasing is needed here, for example, ' pays much attention to detail'). Though she encountered many difficulties during these years, she has the ability to deal with these problems one by one with much patience.

She was never afraid of what she encountered. She prefers to share her experiences and taught me how to solve problems when I was a child. I learned a lot from her pieces of advice. Thanks to her education, I became an independent person and I know how to control my own life easier.

She is the most important person in my life. She gives me a loving family and teaches me how to become a better person. With my mother's emotional support, I have much confidence and healthful attitude to face my life. I really love my mother.

My mother

I want to talk about my mother.

She is a careful and positive woman who works as a mathematics teacher in a public elementary school.She works very hard and detailed is thorough.Though she has encountered many difficulties during this years ,she have has the ability to deal with this these problems one by one with many much patience .

She never complicates what she had met is faced with .She prefers to share her experiences and taught me how to solve a problem when I was a child. I learn a lot from her advices. In Through her education, I have become an independent person and I know how to control my own life more easier better.

She is the most important people person in my life. She gives me a loving family and teaches me how to become a better person. With my mother's emotional support, I have much alot of confidence and a healthy attitude to face my life. I really love my mother.

Good effort!
Best, Rupert