INFORMAL EMAIL.
HI SANDRA:
Thank you for you email. It was nice to hear from you .I'm very happy that you coming to stay with me this weekend. Next weekend is carnival in my town, and I sure you enjoy it, we can do many fun things ,besides the weather is absolutely good like in summer.How are you going to come here by car or train? Both of them are good options but if you don't want drive the train is better because is more relaxing and only it take about two hours from Sevilla to Cadiz, while that the journey by car is more expensive, because you have that pay for petrol and the tollbooth and you can also find traffic jam on the road and that's very boring when you go alone.
I believe is better that you coming by train and I pick you up at the station if you are agree.
Looking forward to seeing you.
Best wishes.
May.
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INFORMAL EMAIL.
HI SANDRA:Thank you for your email. It was nice to hear from you .I'm very happy that you are coming to stay with me this weekend. Next weekend is carnival in my town, and I'm sure you will enjoy it, we can do many fun things ,besides the weather is absolutely good like in summer. Are you going to come here by car or train? Both of them are good options but if you don't want drive the train is better because it's more relaxing and it only takes about two hours from Sevilla to Cadiz, and also the trip by car is more expensive, because you have to pay for petrol and the tollbooth and you can also find traffic jams on the road and that's very boring when you are/drive alone.
I believe it's better that you come by train and I pick you up at the station if you are agree.
Looking forward to seeing you.
Best wishes.
May.
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INFORMAL EMAIL.
HI SANDRA:Thank you for you email. It was nice to hear from you .I'm very happy that you coming are coming to stay with me this weekend. Next weekend is Carnival in my town, and I am sure that you will enjoy it,. we can do many fun things ,besides since the weather is absolutely good (absolutely fantastic or absolutely amazing or just say great) like in the summer. How are you going to come here (going to get here or planning to get here), by car or by train? Both of them are good options, but if you don't want to drive, then the train is better because is more relaxing and only it takes about two hours from Sevilla to Cadiz,. while that the journey (The journey sounds kind of weird. I would say "Going by car" or "Traveling by car") by car is more expensive, because you have that pay for petrol, the tollbooth, and you can also find also might run into a traffic jam on the road and that's very ,which is really boring when you go alone.
I believe is better that you coming by train and I pick you up at the station if you are agree. (I would say this: I believe it is better to come by train and I can pick you up at the train station if you'd like.)
Looking forward to seeing you.
Best wishes.
May.
Great job. I added my way of saying certain things to fit your tone but you pretty much nailed it.
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