Monkey Park in Kyoto , Japan.

I wrote am writing about my favorite tourist place in Kyoto.
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【Arashiyama Monkey Park】

If you have a chance to go to Kyoto, I recommend you also go to Arashiyama.

There are various tourist places in Arahisyama.

Especially Among them, I especially recommend that you to visit Arashiyama Monkey Park. (English capitalizes all major words in proper names of places.)

This place located at the top of the mountain, so we have to climb the mountain for about 15min fifteen minutes to get there.

However, after that, you can see the whole view entire city of the Kyoto from the top.
A lot of Japanese monkeys are living in the park; therefore, you can see them from even up closer.

You can feed monkeys too.
The monkeys are little aggressive, but the baby ones are so cute.

The entry fee is 550 yen.
The food for feeding the monkeys costs 100 yen.

Cost The price ("Price" sounds a little better than "cost" here.) is cheap, and you can enjoy it for a long time, so if you have a chance, you should go there!

Haruka, you are tempting me to visit Japan! I'm working right now and don't have that kind of time =) =D

Monkey Park in Kyoto , Japan.

I wrote my favorite tourist place in Kyoto.
If you find wrong sentences please correct my article.

【Arashiyama Monkey Park】

If you have a chance to go to Kyoto,
I recommend you also go to Arashiyama.

There are various tourist places in Arahisyama, but among them, I especially recommend you to visit Arashiyama monkey park.

Arashiyama is located top of the Arashi mountain, so you have to climb for about 15 minutes to get there.

However after that, you can see the whole of Kyoto. A lot of Japanese monkeys are also living in the park, therefore, you can see them from up close as well.

You can feed the monkeys too.
Older monkeys are a little aggressive but the baby ones are so cute.

Entry fee: 550 yen.
Food for feeding: 100 yen.

The cost is really low and you can enjoy the park for a long time, so if you have a chance you should go see it!

A few notes:

"there is a view of Kyoto" works, or "you can see the whole of Kyoto" works, but for some reason, they don't sound good combined. "You can see the Kyoto cityscape" is another way you can describe it. 

Speaking of describing, you might want to add some more descriptors. A "beautiful view", or maybe the park is "one of my favorite places to visit". That way it sounds more like you like the place.

Hope this helps. Let me know if you have any questions. 

Monkey Park in Kyoto , Japan.

I wrote my favorite tourist place in Kyoto.
If you find wrong sentences please correct my article.

【Arashiyama Monkey Park】

If you have a chance to go to Kyoto,
I recommend you also go to Arashiyama. "visit" might work better

There are various tourist places in Arahisyama.

Especially among them, I especially recommend you to l visit
Arashiyama monkey park.

This place is located top of the mountain,
so you have to climb the mountain for about 15min to get there.

However after that, you can see the whole view of the Kyoto.
A lot of Japanese monkeys live in the park, therefore, you can see them from even up closer.

You can feed the monkeys too.
Monkeys are a little aggressive but the baby ones are so cute.

Entry fee is 550 yen.
Food for feeding: 100 yen.

The cost is cheap and you can enjoy yourself for a long time,
So if you have a chance you should go there!