The race
Yesterday it was a rowing compétition's day on Bordeaux's lake. Sun, no wind, the perfect weather for a row. I train two youngs boys, and they won their race. I was very glad for they, it's a great résult. For me it was a hard race, and I couldn't realize a good time.....argh. It'll be for next time, I hope.
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The race
Yesterday there was a rowing competition day on the lake in Bordeaux lake. Sun, no wind, the perfect weather for a row. I trained two young boys and they won their race. I was very glad for them. It was a great result. For me it was a hard race, and I couldn't realize have a good time.....argh. It'll be for I will next time, I hope.**Nice job. Only a few corrections were necessary. It sounds pretty natural, but the sentence "It was a great result" does not sound like it should be here in English. Everything else is very good!
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The race
Yesterday it was a rowing compétition's day on Bordeaux's lake. Sun, no wind, the perfect weather for a row.>Yesterday there was a rowing competition at the lake in Bordeaux. The day was not too sunny nor windy, a perfect weather for rowing.
I train two youngs boys, and they won their race.> I am the trainer of two young boys who participated in the competition, and they won their race.
I was very glad for they, it's a great résult. > I was very happy for them, for it was a great result.
For me it was a hard race, and I couldn't realize a good time.....argh. ??> To me, it was a hard race, but the time they recorded was not what I had expected from them.
It'll be for next time, I hope.> There will be a next time, and I hope they will do better than now.
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