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刚 自 学 中 文 你 们 好! 我 要 学 习 中文。这是第一次 我写汉语。我 会说 点 可是我没只道汉子 多。有人帮我修马? 多谢!

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刚 开始自 学 中 文

你 们 好!
我 要 学 习 中文。这是我第一次 我写汉语。我 会说 点 可是我知道的没只道汉子不 多。有人帮我修改吗修马? 多谢!

Notes:

1. No spaces between chinese characters.

2. I can imagine you thinking in English, how to say “I don't know many characters”, it's normal to translate literally word by word at the beginning (I did the same 5 years ago). After learning more Chinese and through constant hard work and progress, you'll learn how to THINK in Chinese, the Chinese way :)

3. Alternatively you can express yourself as in:

大家好!

可是/但是/不过

我只知道一些最简单/基本的汉字。

可不可以帮我修改?能不能帮我看一下?请你们帮我看一眼。麻烦朋友们帮我纠正一下。

多谢/谢谢/麻烦你们了

4. Also pay attention to homophones when typing pinyin 只道/知道...

5. 没 and 不 are both for negation but:

没 is used in 没有,  没是 is wrong.

不 is used in 不是, 不有 is wrong.

没去 is passive (我昨天没去上课) whereas 不去 is present/future (我今天不去学校,我明天不去开会). 

I think it's not just about writing perfect Chinese, or just correcting your mistakes, it's more valuable to teach you where you were wrong, and why. Only then can you make progress by LEARNING from your mistakes. Also added tips from my own learning experience, things I wished people taught me back then.

Keep curious and passionate, what you see now is only a drop from the ocean. Chinese is a wonderful and beautiful language and all the hard work is definitely worth it. 加油!

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刚 自 学 中 文

你 们 好!
我 要 学 习 中文。这是我第一次 我写汉语。我 会说一点ㄦ 可是我没只道汉子 多 知道的汉字不多。有人帮我修马 修改吗? 多谢!
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刚 自 学 中 文

你 们 好!
我 要 学 习 中文。这是我第一次 我写中文汉语。我 会说 一点 可是我没只道汉子 识字不多。你可以有人帮帮我修改嗎马? 多谢!
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刚开始自学中文

你们大家好!

Tips:

When you know who you talk with then you can use '你们好', kind of you can see the guys. I thought here you might want to say hello to everybody, so you'd better use '大家好'.

我要学习中文。这是我第一次 我写用汉语写东西。我会说一点中文可是我没只知道的汉子字不多。有人帮我修马吗? 多谢!

Tips:

1. 'this is my first time to do something...' => '这是我第一次做某事...'

2. Native Chinese don't say '写汉语'. Usually, we use '用汉语写东西' means write something in Chinese. BUT, you should say '说汉语'. Maybe here makes you confuse. 

3. '汉子' and '汉字' sound similar, but the meaning is different. '汉子' means a strong man and '汉字' means Chinese character.

4. '马' means horse.


I holp this helpful. Happy learning! :)

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刚 自 学 中 文

你 们 好!
我 要 学 习 中文。这是第一次 我写汉语。我 会说 点 可是我没只道汉子 多。有人帮我修马? 多谢!

你们好:

        我要学习中文,这是我第一次写汉语,我会说一点,但是我知道的汉字不多,有人帮我修改吗?(修改一下吗)。多谢!

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