Media and Celebrities
Some people think that celebrities have no right to complain when the media intrude their privacy. I think it is too harsh judgement. Their job is strictly depend on attention of people. They should be loved and admired to get job in new productions or TV programmes. Furthermore, people wonder how celebrities live, what they eat, where they go or whom they are in relationship with. These interests of people should keep alive to sell products which they take part in.
Despite all these, none of people want to live all their life in front of people. For instance, after breaking a boyfriend or a girlfriend, who wants to face with cameras? Or after lost of somebody who is loved, who wants to answer questions? Besides, famous people may want to take a fresh air or a walk to relax without make up or look nice, too. I think it is also annoying to see picture of theirselves and passage says ‘how miserable she/he looks’ or ‘he or she is getting fat?’ or ‘this t-shirt is awful’. They can be famous but still they are Human, so it is hard to stand up to be constantly judged how they look. Even more, it is also impossible to expect someone to always behave nice. Sometimes, people are in bad mood because something goes wrong in their life or maybe they just do not sleep well last night. These things can make people annoyed and upset so they can overreact to questions asked or people who want to take a photo with them. I can admit that it is better something like that never happens, but is it fair to make diatribe to celebrities while all of us can behave like that?
Apperantly, to live in the public and to be on the focus of the media bring celebrities a lot of benifit and to be and stay under spotlight is also part of their work. But in my opinion, it is wrong that media or their fans intervene their privacy too much. At least, they have right to complain. It would be unjustness to expect them endure all intruding their life, just they take an advantage to live in public.
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Media and Celebrities
Some people think that celebrities have no right to complain when the media intrude on their privacy. I think it is too harsh a judgement. Their job is strictly dependent on getting people's attention of people. They need to should be loved and admired to get //jobs/a job// in new productions or TV programmes.[İyi anlayıp anlamadığımi bilmiyorum] Furthermore, people wonder how celebrities live, what they eat, where they go or //[daha formal olarak:] whom/ [bence daha normal olarak:] who// they are in //relationships/a relationship// with. These interests of people should keep alive to sell products which they take part in. Anlamadım, belki: 'They need to keep people interested in them to sell the products they promote'.[Bence, İtalkide 10 satırdan daha olan metni kimse düzeltmek istemiyor! Belki yarın devam edeceğim...]
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Apperantly Apparently, to live in the public eye and to be //under on the focus of the media/the focus of media interest// brings celebrities a lot of benefits benifit and to be and stay under the spotlight is also part of their//work/job//. But in my opinion, it is wrong that //the media or their fans/[gramer olarak yazdıkların doğru, ama bence ikianlamlı: 'their' kimdir? Celebrities' fans ya da the media's? Daha belli bu:] their fans and the media// intervene in their privacy too much/[daha doğal:] it is wrong for X and Y to intrude too much on their privacy. At least, //they /[kim belli değil. Belki:] the stars/celebs// have the right to complain. //It would be unjustness an injustice to expect them endure all intruding their life, just they take an advantage to live in public./Belki: It would be unfair/unjust to expect them to put up with every intrusion in their life, just because they benefit from living in the public eye.//[Son cümlenin ikinci kismini iyi anlayıp anladığımı bilmiyorum]
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Despite all //this/these factors//, none of people nobody wants to live //all their/their whole/their entire// life in front of other people. For instance, after breaking up with a boyfriend or a girlfriend, who wants to face with cameras? Or after lost //the loss of/losing// //somebody who is loved/[kulağa daha iyi geliyor:] a loved one//, who wants to answer questions? Besides, famous people may want to take a breath of fresh air or a walk to relax without make up or look //nice/stunning//, too. I think it is also annoying for them to see a picture of theirselves themselves and a caption which passage says ‘how miserable she/he looks’ or ‘ is he or she is getting fat?’ or ‘this t-shirt is awful’. They can be famous but still they are human, so it is hard to stand up to be constantly judged on how they look. Even more, it is also impossible to expect someone to always behave nicely. Sometimes, people are in a bad mood because something goes wrong in their life or maybe they just //did do not/didn't// sleep well last night. These things can make people annoyed and upset so they can overreact to questions asked or people who want to take a photo with them. //I can admit that it is better something like that never happens/I recognise it is better for something like that not to happen//, but is it fair to make diatribe to criticise celebrities while all of us can behave like that?
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