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United States flagAllison (艾丽森）
每冬天生病 在冬天时我家生病。这个冬天我们已经生病三次还是四次。我有四个孩子，所以等到他们生病我很忙和很累。现在我也生病。每天家务特别难的。我有头疼可是都孩子哭了高得。我希望春天会来快。 In wintertime my family gets sick. This winter we have already been sick three or four times. I have four children, so during this time I am very busy and tired. Right now I am also sick. Every day housework is especially difficult. I have a headache, but my children cry loudly. I hope spring will come soon.

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每冬天生病

一到冬天我家人总会生病。这个冬天我们已经生病三、四次了。我有四个孩子，所以他们一旦生病我就很忙和很累。现在我也生病了。每天做家务都觉得特别难。我有头疼的毛病，可是孩子们哭得很厉害。我希望春天快点来。

In wintertime my family gets sick. This winter we have already been sick three or four times. I have four children, so during this time I am very busy and tired. Right now I am also sick. Every day housework is especially difficult. I have a headache, but my children cry loudly. I hope spring will come soon.


I can understand ..You have four children.So when the children are sick mother especially hard.But you are very great, with four children, to do so much housework, persist in learning Chinese, that's great, come on.

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每冬天生病 A more natural way of expressing given your English nuance.

在每个冬天时, 我家人会生病。这个冬天我们已经生了病三四次还是四次。我有四个孩子，所以这时等到他们生病我很忙也和很累。现在我也生病了。每天家务觉得特别难的。我有头疼但可是都孩子还在高声地哭了高得。我希望春天会来快到。

In wintertime my family gets sick. This winter we have already been sick three or four times. I have four children, so during this time I am very busy and tired. Right now I am also sick. Every day housework is especially difficult. I have a headache, but my children cry loudly. I hope spring will come soon.
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每冬天生病

一到冬天我家人就容易生病。这个冬天我家人已经生了三到四次病了。我有四个孩子，所以他们一旦生病我就会很忙很累。现在我也生病了。每天做家务特别累。我头疼可是孩子们在大哭。我希望春天快点来。

In wintertime my family gets sick. This winter we have already been sick three or four times. I have four children, so during this time I am very busy and tired. Right now I am also sick. Every day housework is especially difficult. I have a headache, but my children cry loudly. I hope spring will come soon.
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每冬天生病

\\ 每年冬天我们家都爱生病

在冬天时我家生病。这个冬天我们已经生病三次还是四次。我有四个孩子，所以等到他们生病我很忙和很累。现在我也生病。每天家务特别难的。我有头疼可是都孩子哭了高得。我希望春天会来快。

\\ 冬天，我们家都生病了。 今年都闹腾三四次了。我有四个娃， 真是累死我了。 搞得我自己也生病了。每天做家务都是一件困难的事情。我有头痛的毛病，孩子们又爱哭闹。 真的希望春天早点到来。

In wintertime my family gets sick. This winter we have already been sick three or four times. I have four children, so during this time I am very busy and tired. Right now I am also sick. Every day housework is especially difficult. I have a headache, but my children cry loudly. I hope spring will come soon.

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每个冬天来临时的生病

在冬天时我家人*生病了（It is a modal word making the sentence more fluent:))。这个冬天我们已经生病三次还是四次。我有四个孩子，所以等到**在他们生病期间我很忙和、很累。现在我也生病了。每天做（Verb is necessary in Chinese， too）家务都觉得特别艰难的。我有头疼可是都孩子大声地哭着了高得。我希望春天会来快一点到来***。

In wintertime my family gets sick. This winter we have already been sick three or four times. I have four children, so during this time I am very busy and tired. Right now I am also sick. Every day housework is especially difficult. I have a headache, but my children cry loudly. I hope spring will come soon.

*家人 is more accurate I think,like the difference between home and family

**等到  approximately  means 'until'

***会来快一点is correct too, but 快一点到来is more familiar to Chinese:)

 wish you a speedy recovery祝你早日痊愈 

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