My first time writting on Italki. About my hometown and me
Hello everyone!
Today it is first time I decide to make a writting on Italki. To be honest I don´t know about what topics I want to talk so It may be a good idea to start talking about my city and myself.
Well, my name is Aitor Acedo and come from Almería (photo on text).
Almería is a spanish southeastern coast city. It is a realtive famous place to be the scenary from classic films ( The good, the bad and the ugly ; Patton ; Lawrence from Arabia ; Indiana Jones) and recently from series as Games of Thrones (season 6) and films as Exodus.
Focus on me, I am a glad person who loves travelling, culture, politics , and music. I am trying to find people toshare my likes around the world and make a spanish-english exchange , learning together and enjoy a lot!
That´s all for my first text. Thanks in advance for their corrections.
Cheers!
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My first time writing on Italki: About my hometown and me
Hello everyone!Today it is first time I decided to make a writting write ("Make a writing" sounds very odd in English.) on Italki. To be honest, I don´t know about what topics I want to talk about, ("About" in English is used more often than "sobre" in Spanish.) so it may be a good idea to start talking about my city and myself.
Well, my name is Aitor Acedo, and I come (Pronouns must be included in English, because unlike Spanish, the verb ending does not automatically tell us who you're talking about.) from Almería (photo below the text). ("Below" = debajo de)
Almería is a southeastern Spanish (Nationalities are capitalized, and English puts directions before place names.) southeastern coast city. It is a relatively famous place to be because it is the scenery from certain classic films (The Good, the Bad and the Ugly, Patton, Lawrence from Arabia, and Indiana Jones) and recently from series such as Games of Thrones (Season 6) and films such as Exodus.
Focus on me, About me: ("Focus on me" = concéntrate en mí) I am a glad happy ("Glad" is always temporary, but "happy" can be temporary or permanent.) person who loves traveling, culture, politics, and music. I am trying to find people to share my likes interests with around the world and make a Spanish-English exchanges. We can learning together and enjoy it a lot!
That´s all for my first text. Thanks in advance for their the corrections.
Cheers!
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My first time writing on Italki. About my hometown and me
Hello, everyone!Today it is the first time I decided to make a writing on Italki. To be honest I don´t know what topics I want to talk about, so It may be a good idea to start talking about my city and myself.
Well, my name is Aitor Acedo, and I come from Almería (photo below the text).
Almería is a southeastern Spanish coast city. It is a relatively famous place because it is the scenery from classic films ( The good, the bad and the ugly; Patton; Lawrence from Arabia; Indiana Jones) and recently from series such as Games of Thrones (season 6) and films such as Exodus.
About me, I am a glad person who loves traveling, culture, politics, and music. I am trying to find people to share my interests with around the world and make a Spanish-English exchange, learning together and enjoy it a lot!
That´s all for my first text. Thanks in advance for their corrections.
Cheers!
Hello, Aitor! I corrected with yellow color your writing using the program for proofreading Grammarly (it's a free version) and I corrected with green color looking for the next correction. This is my blog: http://item1000.blogspot.com . Writing is a simple way to encourage learning English. Your note about Almería is written very well!
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