I'm a photographer!
One day, when I was in Tver on New Year’s holidays, my sister asked me to take some photos with her. It was on 5th January. It was snowing. The temperature was about -25˚C… But I agreed. She dressed on her coat, and didn’t take her cap, because she didn’t want to spoil her hairs. I was in Columbia’s winter trousers and warm jacket.
We came out. It was really cold. My fingers and nose were frozen; my camera didn’t like this weather too. But when we came to the park on the bank of the Volga, I understood that our photosession would be interesting. There were some children only at the beginning of the park. They rolled down the snow hills on sleds. And there was nobody at the other parts of the park. It was beautiful: a snow, a park, a silence and snow river. It might be magic if it wasn’t so cold!
Next place that we wanted to visit with cam was a New Year tree on the Afanasy Nikitin’s square. We were surprised when we saw a lot of ducks under the tree. They were lazy ducks, who didn’t want to fly to the warm countries. They was sleeping, or watching us. One man gave them some bread. They was walking on his legs and asking some else! It was very fun. But we were frozen and wanted go home.
I don’t regret that I walked on that cold day, because it was interesting little journey and we have interesting pictures!
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I'm a photographer!
One day, when I was in Tver on New Year’s holidays, my sister asked me to take some photos with her. It was on 5th January and it was snowing. The temperature was about -25˚C… but I agreed. She put on her coat, and did not take her cap, because she did not want to spoil her hair. I was in Columbia’s winter trousers and a warm jacket.We came out. It was really cold. My fingers and nose were frozen; my camera did not like this weather either. But when we came to the park on the bank of the Volga, I understood/saw that our photo-session would be interesting. There were some unaccompanied children at the entrance to the park. They rolled down the snowy hills on sleds. And there was nobody else in the park. It was beautiful: snow, a park, a silence and snowy river. It might have been magic if it was not so cold!
Next place that we wanted to visit with the cam was a New Year tree in Afanasy Nikitin Square. We were surprised when we saw a lot of ducks under the tree. They were lazy ducks, who did not want to fly to warmer countries. They were sleeping, or watching us. One man gave them some bread. (He was walking on his legs and asking some else!?) It was very funny. But we were frozen and wanted to go home.
I don’t regret that I walked out on that cold day, because it was an interesting little journey and we took some interesting pictures!
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I'm a photographer!
One day, when I was in Tver on New Year’s holidays, my sister asked me to take some photos with her. It was on January 5th. It was snowing. The temperature was about -25˚C, but I agreed. She put on her coat, but didn’t take her cap because she didn’t want to mess up her hair. I was in Columbia's winter trousers and warm jacket.We came out. It was really cold. My fingers and nose were frozen; my camera didn’t like this weather either. But when we came to the park on the bank of the Volga, I understood that our photo session would be interesting. There were some children only at the front of the park. They rolled down the snow hills on sleds. There was nobody at the other parts of the park. It was beautiful: snow, a park, silence and frozen river. It might be magic if it wasn’t so cold!
Next place that we wanted to visit with cam was a New Year tree on the Afanasy Nikitin’s square. We were surprised when we saw a lot of ducks under the tree. They were lazy ducks who didn’t want to fly to the warm countries. They was sleeping or watching us. One man gave them some bread. They were walking on his legs and asking some else! (This sentence is not coorect, but I am not exactly sure what you are trying to say, so I did not fix it.) It was very fun, but we were frozen and wanted go home.
I don’t regret that I walked on that cold day because it was an interesting little journey and we have interesting pictures!
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