my ielts task 2, an ielts task 2 for everyone it is argued that nations should focus their investments on railways rather than incentivating traditional “on wheel” transport. As the urban mobility is

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my ielts task 2, an ielts task 2 for everyone it is argued that nations should focus their investments on railways rather than incentivating traditional “on wheel” transport. As the urban mobility is disruptively changing a clear reflection is mandatory. Government decisions on transport will have a consistent importance because of the impacts on our cities and on the environment. In my opinion the debate should focus on two main topics: firstly the economic aspects of the infrastructures and secondly his environmental impacts. For the governments the aim is to consent a rapid transport of citizens and goods, respecting financial public budget and maximizing citizen wealth and the respect of nature. Are railways the best solution? The latest scientific and economic studies largely demonstrate that railway is the cheapest and ecofriendliest choice. Nevertheless it is a fast and flexible solution. Differently investing on roads would mean incentivating passenger cars tranport and the use of fossils fuels as a consequence. Secondly governments should consider the costs of the infrastructures. It is a complex topic as the investments depend on the specific features of territories but it is certainly sure that a greener investment has much more positive long term effects. It could be argued that without a large sistem of roads a nation could not sustain an high level of industrialisation due to a slow endurance of transport. It is certainly true but as a matter of fact in a few decades 80% of population will live in large cities. In this evolutive context it becomes more important a widespread and high technolgical system of railways connecting our cities.

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My IELTS Task 2, An IELTS Task For Everyone

One might argue that nations should focus their investments on railways rather than investing in traditional "road" transport. As urban mobility is constantly changing, a clear reflection is mandatory. Government decisions regarding transport will remain consistently important, because of the impact on our cities, and our environment. In my opinion, the debate should focus on two main topics: firstly, the economic aspects of the infrastructure, and secondly, its environmental impact. For governments, the aim is to develop a rapid transportation system for citizens and goods, respecting budgets, and maximizing citizen wealth, all while respecting nature. Are railways the best solution? The latest scientific and economic studies, largely show that railways are the cheapest and most ecofriendly solution, as well as being fast and flexible. Differently, investing in roads would mean grater usage of cars, and dependence on fossil fuels as well. Secondly, governments should consider the costs of the infrastructure. It is a complex topic, as the investments depend on the specific features of territories, but certainly, a greener investment has a much more positive long term effect. One might argue that without a large system of roads, a nation could not sustain a high level of industrialization due to a slow and inefficient road system. It is certainly true, but as a matter of fact, in a few decades 80% of the population will live in large cities. In these quickly evolving times, it may become more important, to have railways connecting our cities.

Overall Giulio I think you did a nice job. I made some corrections regarding flow and sentence structure, and I also made some changes regarding word choice, but all in all, I think you did well! If you have any questions please let me know! If you would like help to practice and improve your English, I'd be happy to help you!

I had to cut some stuff out to be under the character limit. If I highlighted it blue then that means I didn't know what you were trying to say. Don't worry about all the commas I inserted, it's mostly stylistic. Some of my spelling might look strange as well because I use American, not British spelling. We use -ize , while the Brits use -ise.

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