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Good evening!
Today was the third day. Thank you for visiting us today!
Even if it's just begun, the fourth performance is already ended!
... Too fast! lol
Maybe I'll think that it is too fast even at last show. It is quick! lol
But what about you?
If I think that it is too early for me, do the people who come to see me also think the same? lol
Since it is fun time it's going to pass quickly!〜(*'-'*)
So, let's do the two shows tomorrow!
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Good evening!Today was the third day. Thank you for visiting us today!
Even if it's just begun, the fourth performance is has already ended! (You can also say "the fourth performance is already ending" if it has not ended yet but will soon.)
... Too fast! lol
Maybe I'll think that it is too fast even at the last show. It is quick! lol
But What about you? (It's best not to start a sentence with a conjunction, although there's nothing wrong with it grammatically.)
If I think that it is too early for me, do the people who come to see me also think the same? lol
Since it is will be a fun time, it's going to pass quickly!〜(*'-'*) (Make sure your tenses match: you're talking about the future, so both clauses should be future tense.)
So let's do the our two shows tomorrow! (There's nothing wrong with "the two shows," but "our two shows" sounds better...assuming they are your two shows of course.)
I hope my corrections are useful. Please let me know if you have any more questions. Nicely done, Rian!
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