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I am Panda and my native language is Chinese. I am fond of singing, but I don't sing well. Sometimes I am quiet and sometimes lively. I want to make lots of friends from all over the world. This will help me to know different countries' languages and cultures. Now I am learning Japanese and English. It is difficult but I think I can succeed if I study hard.
maybe someone can make it correct and idiomatic
我是panda,母语是中文,热爱唱歌,虽然唱得不太好,时静时动,想和很多人交朋友,了解不同区域,国家的语言,文字及其文化,现在正在学习日语和英语,日语和英语挺难的,不过我相信通过努力是可以学好的I am panda. (Use a period not a comma because Subject + Verb + Object = a sentence.)
My native language was is Chinese. (母语=native language, not just native. Use the verb IS because your native language will always be present tense 现在时态. Always capitalize the first letter of a sentene and proper names languages, such as the name of languages (你会注意到在开始写一个句子或一个地名或专有名词时,要用到大写字母。)
I am fond of singing, but i am do not sing a songs well. (Singing = activity, meaning you do it often... 如果你连一首歌都唱不好,那就用这个单词"songs", 可是,如果除了一首特别的歌以外,都唱得很好,那就用这个短语“can't sing a song well.")
Sometime I am quiet, sometime lively. I want to make lots of friend who came from all of over the world. 英语的想法就是把全世界从上帝的视角看待了或观察了。
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I can know want to understand different zone regions, countries, languages, and cultures. (Use plural)
Now I am learning Japanese and English that was which are difficult, but i think of it will came ture if i study hard, I can learn them.
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