ielts writing part 1 cement and concrete making processes
The given diagrams illustrate how cement is made and how it is possible to mix it with other components in certain proportions to create a conrete.
At the first diagram we can see that it is needed two kind of material to start producing of cement - limestone and clay. They both should be crushed at first and then mixed toghether. After passing the mixer, the mixture of clay and limestone moves to a rotating heater where it is subjected to a firing at high temperature. Following been fired every piece of this mixture is made smaller in size by grinder. As a result of this process we have ready cement, which should be packed in bags and delivered on constructions site.
The second diagram shows us a process of making concrete. In comparison with the process of cement creation it is much more simplier. Everything is needed is just to put 15 % of cement, 10% of water and 25 % of sand in a huge concrete mixer, and to add there 50% of small stones whish are called "gravel".
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ielts writing part 1 cement and concrete making processes
The given diagrams illustrate how cement is made and how it is possible to mix it with other components in certain proportions to create concrete.In the first diagram we can see that two kinds of material are needed to start producing of cement - limestone and clay. They both should be crushed at first and then mixed together. After passing through the mixer, the mixture of clay and limestone moves to a rotating heater where it is subjected to a firing at high temperature. Following being fired, every piece of this mixture is made smaller in size by a grinder. As a result of this process we have ready cement, which can be packed in bags and delivered to the construction sites.
The second diagram shows us the process of making concrete. In comparison with the process of cement creation it is much simpler. All that is needed is just to put 15 % of cement, 10% of water and 25 % of sand in a huge concrete mixer, and to add the balance of 50% in the form of small stones called "gravel".
Hello Olga,
This is a good response to the exercise. You haven't given us the graphic but I am certain I have seen the exercise before and you appear to have covered all the main points in a logical manner. Be careful with some of your collocations 'In the first diagram', 'All that is needed'. Most of the process is described in the impersonal passive which is expected in these types of questions.
Best wishes
Bob
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ielts writing part 1 cement and concrete making processes
The given diagrams illustrate how cement is made and how it is possible to mix it with other components in certain proportions to create a conrete.In the first diagram we can see that it is needed two kinds of material are needed to start producing of cement - limestone and clay. They both should be crushed at first and then mixed toghether. After passing the mixer, the mixture of clay and limestone moves to a rotating heater where it is subjected to a firing at high temperature. Following being fired every piece of this mixture is made smaller in size by grinder. As a result of this process we have ready cement, which should be packed in bags and delivered to constructions sites.
The second diagram shows us the process of making concrete. In comparison with the process of cement creation it is much more simplier. All that is needed is just to put 15 % of cement, 10% of water and 25 % of sand in a huge concrete mixer, and to add there 50% of small stones which are called "gravel".
(If you want any explanations for my changes, let me know)
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