Lunch at a cafe
I went out for lunch with my friend last Sunday. I met her for the first time in a long time. We went to a cafe which is converted an old storehouse. We had lunch and talked for a while. We met at 11:30 and said goodbye each other around 4:30. It was a liitle long as lunch:b But it was really fun:D
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Lunch at a cafe
I went out for lunch with my friend last Sunday. I met her for the first time in a long while(*). We went to a cafe which is converted from an old storehouse. We had lunch and talked for a while. We met at 11:30 and said goodbye to each other at around 4:30. It was a little long as for a lunch :b But it was really fun :D(*) - "time" is not incorrect, however to avoid repeating yourself too much you can use "while" there.
Just a few corrections, you did very well overall. If you have any doubts or questions feel free to ask.
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