Writing 7
Dear Laura,
Today, I'm moving to a new flat near to Barcelona, because I need a bigger flat that mine. Also I want a flat more close to my work.
Since you have time, I want to invite you to visit my new home because I know that you willl like.
Best,
María.
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Writing 7
Dear Laura,Today, I'm moving to a new flat near to Barcelona, because I need a bigger flat that mine than my current one/flat. Also I want a flat more close (it is more natural to say 'closer') to my work.
Since you have time, I want to invite you to visit my new home because I know that you will like it.
Best,
María.
Nice writing Maria. When we use 'near' and 'close to', it is just like that. "I live close to the subway entrance" or "I live near the subway entrance". It's not common to say 'near to'. If you have other questions let me know.
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Hello Maria!
Your entry is pretty good,pretty much everything is ok,except for the few minor mistakes i highlighted.
Writing 7
Today, I'm moving to a new flat near to Barcelona, because I need a bigger flat that than mine(better:"than the one i am in now"). Also I want a flat more close closer to my work.
Since When you have time, I want to invite you to visit my new home because I know that you willl will like it.
All the best,
María.
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