虎纹。。。
我不喜欢有虎纹的服装和包包，我觉得这样很俗丽。我真的不喜欢，例如在大学有过一个美丽的女孩；但是从看了她背着一个虎纹的包，对我来说，她不美丽了甚至当她没背着那个包。
陷入了一个复杂的局面当我爱人的妈妈给了我一个礼物。她给了我虎纹的衣服！
然而我想有虎纹的家具很可爱，很美看，特别白黑色条纹。
tiger print...
I dislike tiger prints on clothes, accessories, bags etc. I think it's tacky. My dislike is so extreme, for example there was this pretty girl at uni; one day I saw her carrying a tiger-print bag, and from that day on I never thought she's pretty anymore, even when she's not carrying the bag around.
Things got complicated when my lover's mother gave me gifts. She gave me a tiger-print shirt!
However I think tiger prints are pretty and cute on furnitures, especially black strips on white.
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虎纹。。。
我不喜欢虎纹服装和包包，我觉得这样很俗气。我的不喜有些极端。打个比方，大学内有个很漂亮的女孩。可自从有一天我看见她背着虎纹包包后，我便不再觉得她美丽了，即便是她没有背虎纹包的时候。当我爱人的母亲送予我礼物后，局面变得复杂。她送我虎纹衣服！
然而我觉得印有虎纹的家具很可爱，美丽，特别是白黑色条纹。
tiger print...
I dislike tiger prints on clothes, accessories, bags etc. I think it's tacky. My dislike is so extreme, for example there was this pretty girl at uni; one day I saw her carrying a tiger-print bag, and from that day on I never thought she's pretty anymore, even when she's not carrying the bag around.
Things got complicated when my lover's mother gave me gifts. She gave me a tiger-print shirt!
However I think tiger prints are pretty and cute on furnitures, especially black strips on white.
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虎纹。。。
我不喜欢有虎纹的服装和包包，我觉得这样很俗丽。这里应该是“俗气”。
建议改为：我不喜欢有虎纹的服装和包包，我觉得这样很俗气。
我真的不喜欢，例如在大学，有过一个美丽的女孩；但是从看了她背着一个虎纹的包，对我来说，她不美丽了，甚至当她没背着那个包。
“从……”的范围很广，这里使用“自从……之后”表示发生一件事情之后；
建议改为：我真的不喜欢，比如在大学，有一个美丽的女孩；但是自从看了她背着一个虎纹的包之后，对我来说，她不再美丽了，甚至当她没背着那个包的时候也是。
陷入了一个复杂的局面。当我爱人的妈妈给了我一个礼物。她给了我虎纹的衣服！
第一个句子没有主语
“当……时”表示when
建议改为：这使我陷入了一个复杂的局面。当我爱人的妈妈给了我一个礼物的时候。她给了我虎纹的衣服！
然而我想有虎纹的家具很可爱，很美看，特别白黑色条纹。
建议修改为：但是我想有虎纹的家具很可爱，很好看，特别是黑白色条纹的家具。
tiger print...
I dislike tiger prints on clothes, accessories, bags etc. I think it's tacky. My dislike is so extreme, for example there was this pretty girl at uni; one day I saw her carrying a tiger-print bag, and from that day on I never thought she's pretty anymore, even when she's not carrying the bag around.
Things got complicated when my lover's mother gave me gifts. She gave me a tiger-print shirt!
However I think tiger prints are pretty and cute on furnitures, especially black strips on white.
我也不喜欢虎纹哈哈哈哈
写的很好，尤其是“甚至”这个词，用的很棒！
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虎纹。。。
我不喜欢有虎纹的服装和包包，我觉得这样很俗气。我真的不喜欢，例如在大学有过一个美丽的女孩，但是从看了她背着一个虎纹的包。对我来说，她不美丽了我甚至当她没背着那个包。陷入了一个复杂的局面当我爱人的妈妈给了我一个礼物。她给了我虎纹的衣服！
然而我想有虎纹的家具很可爱，很美看，特别白黑色条纹。
tiger print...
I dislike tiger prints on clothes, accessories, bags etc. I think it's tacky. My dislike is so extreme, for example there was this pretty girl at uni; one day I saw her carrying a tiger-print bag, and from that day on I never thought she's pretty anymore, even when she's not carrying the bag around.
Things got complicated when my lover's mother gave me gifts. She gave me a tiger-print shirt!
However I think tiger prints are pretty and cute on furnitures, especially black strips on white.
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是的，我们叫豹纹，黑白的，我们叫斑马纹。很少叫虎纹，虽然我们知道你说的是什么。
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恩,免不了。
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