当钢琴老师
我当钢琴老师已经七年了。我开始教钢琴是因为我的邻居想要我教她孙女，以及自己的女儿满了六岁，因此准备开始学。因为我没有音乐学位，所以我当时觉得自己不能胜任教钢琴，其实我有的时候还会感觉一样！我现在一共有七个学生：五个是孩子，两个是大人。
我五岁时开始学钢琴，一直学到十五岁那年。作为一个成年人，我在教会里面弹钢琴弹了十年多了。我读初中和高中的时候，我是学校乐队的一个队员，而且我从小到大都在教会的唱诗班唱歌。我一直都在参与音乐活动！
(I have been a piano teacher for 7 years now. I started teaching because my neighbor wanted me to teach her granddaughter, and because my own daughter had just turned 6 and was ready for lessons. I do not have a music degree, so I felt very inadequate to teach, and sometimes I still feel that way! I have 7 students now: 5 children, and 2 adults.
I started studying piano when I was 5 years old, and took lessons until I was 15. As an adult, I have played the piano in church for more than 10 years. I was also in the school band in middle school and high school, and have sung in church choirs since I was a child. I have always been involved in musical activities!)
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当钢琴老师
我当钢琴老师已经七年了。我开始教钢琴是因为我的邻居想要我教她孙女，以及自己的女儿满了六岁，*因此准备开始学 也可以开始学了。因为我没有音乐学位，所以我当时觉得自己不能胜任教钢琴，其实**我有的时候还会感觉一样我现在还是会有这种感觉！我现在一共有七个学生：五个是孩子，两个是大人。
我五岁时开始学钢琴，一直学到十五岁那年。作为一个成年人，我在教会里面弹钢琴弹了十年多了。我读初中和高中的时候，我是学校乐队的一个队员，而且我从小到大都在教会的唱诗班唱歌。我一直都在参与音乐活动！
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* Readers misunderstand that it is YOU who is ready to learn. Adding 也 implies that it is talking about your daughter.
In fact I am not clear of your meaning until I read your English, without which even native speakers could just ignore it.
It could also be corrected by adding a subjet "她" -> 因此她也可以开始学了.which makes the sentence more explicit.
**This sentence sounds unnatural and the meaning is not clear.
Generally your composition is quite good!
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当钢琴老师
我当钢琴老师已经七年了。我开始教钢琴是因为我的邻居想要我教她孙女，以及自己的女儿满了六岁，因此准备开始学。因为我没有音乐学位，所以我当时觉得自己不能胜任教钢琴，其实我有的时候还会感觉一样有同样的感觉！我现在一共有七个学生：五个是孩子，两个是大人。我五岁时开始学钢琴，一直学到十五岁那年。作为一个成年人，我在教会里面弹钢琴弹了十年多了。我读初中和高中的时候，我是学校乐队的一个队员，而且我从小到大都在教会的唱诗班唱歌。我一直都在参与音乐活动！
(I have been a piano teacher for 7 years now. I started teaching because my neighbor wanted me to teach her granddaughter, and because my own daughter had just turned 6 and was ready for lessons. I do not have a music degree, so I felt very inadequate to teach, and sometimes I still feel that way! I have 7 students now: 5 children, and 2 adults.
I started studying piano when I was 5 years old, and took lessons until I was 15. As an adult, I have played the piano in church for more than 10 years. I was also in the school band in middle school and high school, and have sung in church choirs since I was a child. I have always been involved in musical activities!)
Well done! 写得非常好！
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当钢琴老师
我当钢琴老师已经七年了。我开始教钢琴是因为我的邻居想要我教她孙女，以及自己的女儿满了六岁，因此准备开始学。因为我没有音乐学位，所以我当时觉得自己不能胜任教钢琴，现在我有的时候还是会有那种担心。我现在一共有七个学生：五个是孩子，两个是大人。我从五岁开始学钢琴，一直学到十五岁。读初中和高中的时候，我一直是学校乐队的成员。我在教会里弹钢琴已经十多年了，而且从小时候起一直在教会的唱诗班里唱歌。我一直都在参与音乐活动。
你真棒！
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当钢琴老师
我当钢琴老师已经七年了。我开始教钢琴是因为我的邻居想要我教她孙女，以及自己的女儿满了六岁，因此准备开始学。因为我没有音乐学位，所以我当时觉得自己不能胜任教钢琴，其实我有的时候还会感觉一样还是会有这种感觉！我现在一共有七个学生：五个是孩子，两个是大人。
我五岁时开始学钢琴，一直学到十五岁那年。作为一个成年人，我在教会里面弹钢琴弹了十多年了。我读初中和高中的时候，我是学校乐队的一个名队员，而且我从小到大都在教会的唱诗班唱歌。我一直都在参与音乐活动！
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当钢琴老师
我当钢琴老师已经有七年了。我开始教钢琴是因为了我的邻居想要我教她邻居的孙女，也是以及因为自己的女儿满了六岁了, 可以开始学了，因此准备开始学。因为Too many usage我没有什么音乐等級 more self-humility学位，所以总会我当时觉得自己教人钢琴有限不能胜任教钢琴，其实我有的时候还会感觉一样！我[不知不觉]现在我一共有七个学生：五个小是孩子，两个成是大人。我五岁时开始学钢琴，一直学到十五岁为止但那年。作为一个成年时人，我在教堂会里作为面弹钢琴乐者已有弹了十年多了。我也曾经在读初中和高中的乐队里作为一队员时候，我是学校乐队的一个队员，又而且我从小到大都在教会里的唱诗班唱歌唱。我一直都有在参与音乐活动的包括在内！
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