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I need to improve my writing skill Hello, everyone. My name is Juliana. I'm from Brazil. I need to improve my writing skills for to do a test. I'm Science Teacher in a Elementary School. I'm Married and I have a litter daughter. I'm trying to write this, without help for google, it's just me... I read a lot, because everyone says that is the best way to improve my writing. I have already read Marry Poppins in English, The Snow Queen and, now, I have been reading A love for life, Penny Hancook. But I'm not sure about my skills, because I think in Portuguese first, and then will be so hard to write em English after. Someone have a tip for improve my skills in English writing? Thank you! Juliana

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I need to improve my writing skills

Hello, everyone.
My name is Juliana. I'm from Brazil.
I need to improve my writing skills for to do a test.

I'm Science Teacher in an elementary school. I'm married and I have a young daughter.

I'm trying to write this, without help for google, it's just me...
I read a lot, because everyone says that is the best way to improve my writing.
I have already read Mary Poppins in English, The Snow Queen and now I have been I'm currently reading A Love for Life, Penny Hancock.

But I'm not sure about my skills, because I think in Portuguese first, and then will be so hard to write in English after.


Does someone have a tip to improve my skills in English writing?

Thank you!

Juliana


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I've corrected your basic grammar, so if you could read over it and then read my explanation of what I changed, that would be great!


First of all, you only capitalize words in English that are either at the start of a sentence or are a proper noun (A noun referring to a specific thing or place. Think of Lisa vs the girl. Lisa is a specific girl, so Lisa is capitalized. Girl is just girl, and on its own could refer to any girl, so it is not capitalized unless at the beginning of a sentence) with the exception of I. 

When 'a' is used before something that starts with a vowel (a,e,i,o, or u) it becomes "an". So instead of "a elementary school" it's "an elementary school". 


I hope this helps!

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(Hi Juliana, nice to meet you!)

I need to improve my writing skills

Hello, everyone.
My name is Juliana. I'm from Brazil.
*I need to improve my writing skills for to do a test.

*I want to improve my writing skills because I will be taking an English test.

I'm an Science Teacher in an  Elementary School. I'm Married and I have a little daughter.

I'm trying to write this without help for google, it's just me...
I read a lot, because everyone says that is the best way to improve my writing.
I have already read Marry Poppins in English.The Snow Queen and, now, I have been reading A love for life, Penny Hancook.

But I'm not sure about my skills, because I think in Portuguese first, and then will be so hard to write em English after.

Someone have a tip for improve my skills in English writing?

Thank you!

Juliana

Hey Juliana! Just keep working at it and don't get discouraged! :) 

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I need to improve my writing skills

Hello, everyone.
My name is Juliana and I'm from Brazil.
I need to improve my writing skills for to do a test.

I'm an elementary  science teacher, in a Elementary School. I'm married and I have a litter small daughter.

I'm trying to write this, without help for from Google, it's just me...


I read a lot, because since everyone says that it is the best way to improve my writing skills. I have already read Marry Poppins in English, the Snow Queen and, now, I have been reading A Love forLife, by Penny Hancook.

But I'm not sure about my skills, because As I think first in Portuguese first, and then so it will be so harder to write in em English afterwards.

Someone Do you have any tip for to improve my skills in English writing skills?

Thanks you!


Juliana

Besides having to read, you need to write often as well.  Post it and have them corrected.  Not only this, also ask questions why it is corrected this way.  You will never improve if you don't ask questions on those corrections you don't understand.

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I need to improve my writing skills

Hello, everyone.
My name is Juliana. I'm from Brazil.
I need to improve my writing skills for to do a test.

I'm a Science Teacher in an Elementary School. I'm married and I have a little daughter.

I'm trying to write this without help from google, it's just me...
I read a lot, because everyone says that is the best way to improve my writing.
I have already read Marry Poppins in English, The Snow Queen and, now, I have been reading A love for life, by Penny Hancook.

But I'm not sure about my skills, because I think in Portuguese first, and it's hard to write in English after.

Does anyone have a tip for me to improve my skills in English writing?

Thank you!

Juliana
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I need to improve my writing skills.

Hello everyone,
My name is Juliana. I'm from Brazil.
I need to improve my writing skills to do a test.

I am a Science Teacher in an Elementary School. I'm Married and I have a litter daughter.

I'm trying to write this, without help from google, just me...
I read a lot, because everyone says that this is the best way to improve my writing.
I have already read Marry Poppins in English, The Snow Queen and, now, I have been reading A love for life, Penny Hancook.

But I'm not sure about my skills, because I think in Portuguese first, and then will be so hard to write in English after.

Someone have a tip for improve my skills in English writing?

Thank you!

Juliana

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