I’m Tired
From yesterday to this day, I have sleep for around fifteen hours. Now I’m still so tired to do this. For me, regularly, there would be several days I felt tired in a month. I think my energy is limited even if I am young, so if I overdraft my energy before, it would oblige me to sleep more some days after. I tried my best to go through it and made preparations for following days. I watched some movies to relax myself, moreover, I didn’t think about my study, my life, just like taking a holiday. I hope that I can go back and go on fighting tomorrow.
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I’m Tired
From Since yesterday to this day, I have sleep slept for around about fifteen hours, now I’m still so tired to do this [1]. For me, regularly, every month there would be several days when I felt would get really tired in a month. I think my energy is limited even if I am young, so if I overdraft my energy before overexert, I it would oblige me need to sleep more some in the following days after. I tried try my best to go through it and made as well as make preparations for the following days after [2]. I watched some movies to relax myself, moreover, I didn’t avoid thinking about my study and my life, just like taking a holiday. I hope that I can go back and go on fighting tomorrow.---
[1] "to do this"?
[2] It's fine to use "following days" here, but since I've used it in the sentence prior we should use another phrase to avoid repetition.
There was a lot of corrections in this one but that's not necessarily because your writing was incorrect, I just rephrased statements to make it sound more natural :)
Nice work! Nothing wrong with taking a few days out to recharge every month, it's probably inadvertently a really good thing for you.
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I'll correct this next :D
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