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My first italki
This is my first time using italki. (Can also be written like : "This is the first time i'm using italki.")I just graduated from Sogang University in Korea and I majored in Business Administration.
So, I'm working at an advertising field. (Can also be: "Right now, I'm working at an advertising field." so it'll sound more natural?)
I'm very interested in contents. For example, K-POP and soap operas in Korea.
→ I'm very interested in contents like K-POP and soap operas.
So in the future, I want to work at CJ E&M that creates lot of awesome and useful contents.
To marketing contents abroad, I think I have to speak English Fluently.
→ In the future, I want to work at CJ E&M that create lots of awesome and useful contents. When marketing abroad, I think I have to speak English fluently.
Actually I lived in United Kingdom and United States when I was 15 years old and 9 years old.But I'm very shamed of my English skills that I forgot almost every thing about English.
→ Actually, I lived in the UK and the US when I was younger but i was so ashamed of my English skills that I forgot almost everything.
My First italki
This is my first time to use italki.I just graduated from Sogang University in Korea and I majored in Business Administration.
So, And now, I'm working at advertising field.
I'm very interested in contents. For example, K-POP and soap operas in Korea.
So In the future, I want to work at CJ E&M that , which creates a lot of awesome and useful contents.
To marketing contents abroad, I think I have to speak English fluently. fluent English.
Actually I lived in both United Kingdom and United States respectively when I was 15 years old and 9 years old.
But I'm very shamed of my English skills that because I forgot almost every thing about English.
So this is That's why I'm learning English :)
My First italki account or My First Time Using italki
This is my first time using italki. I just graduated from Sogang University in Korea and I majored in Business Administration. Furthermore, I'm working in the advertising field. I'm very interested in media content, such as, K-POP and soap operas in Korea. In the future, I want to work at CJ E&M. They create a lot of awesome and useful contents. In order to market contents abroad, I think that I am required to speak English fluently.I had lived in the United Kingdom and The United States of America when I was 9 years old, as well as when I was 15 years old.
But, I'm very ashamed of my English skills because I have forgotten almost everything that I had learned about the English language. For this reason, I want to relearn English.
My First Italki
This is my first time to use Italki.I just graduated from Sogang University in Korea where I majored in Business Administration.
So I'm working in the advertising field.
I'm very interested in contents(?) eg. K-POP and soap operas in Korea.
So in the future I want to work for CJ E&M who create a lot of awesome and useful contents.
To marketing contents abroad, I think I have to speak English fluently.
Actually I lived in United Kingdom and United States when I was 15 years old and 9 years old.
But I'm very ashamed of my English and I forgot almost everything about it.
So this is why I'm learning English :)
Please correct my English.
(Grammar and anything unnatural)
This is my first time using Italki.
I just graduated from Sogang University in Korea, and I
majored in Business Administration.
So, I work in the advertising field.
I'm very interested in things like Kpop and Korean soap
operas.
In the future, I want to work at CJ E&M because they
create a lot of awesome and useful content.
In order to work with marketing abroad, I think I should
speak English fluently.
Actually, I lived in the United States when I was 9 years
old and in the United Kingdom when I was 15.
But I'm very ashamed of my English skills, since I forgot
almost everything I learned.
So this is why I'm learning English again.
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