This well written?

i'ts my first time here. My English is not very good, but i like to learn. I understand English but i have afraid to talk to someone, also it's my first time writing and another people see it. i hope this well written. and i appreciate  that you correct to me .

Is this well written?

This is my first time here. My English is not very good, but I like to learn. I understand English but I am afraid to talk to other people. Also, this is my first time writing for other people to see. I hope this is well written, and I appreciate that you correct me.

Not bad. It is certainly perfectly comprehensible, but there are many grammar and spelling errors. Remember, the purpose of language is communication, and I understand you. Keep writing and talking and studying and you will make fewer errors. It is unlikely you will ever get to zero errors, except in very short essays. Most native speakers make grammar and spelling mistakes.

Seriously, keep writing.

This well written?

i'ts my first time here. My English is not very good, but i like learn(to learn or learning). I understand English but i have(am) afraid to talk to someone, also is my first time writining for the other(another) people see it. i hope this well written. and i will appreciatte that(it) if you correct me .