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Winter I'm not a big fan of winter. In a matter of fact I don't like cold. Snow and ice on my car always surprising me when I'm late to work. And going out in winter is very time-consuming. This season has got a lot disadvantages, but it's beautiful (especially when snow is falling). My favorite activity is hiking all winter days, when snow is everywhere, sun is shining and frost is hard. I was rising on farm in picturesque region of Poland, so I used to walk thru frozen lake and go home in snow-covered forest. When I was a child I thought that snow and frost was for month or two. Now snow is for a week - I don't always have time to go for a walk and see how beautiful is world in winter. Recently I had disagreement why now winter is shorter. Is it climate changing? Or maybe we grown up? In past we had a lot time for making a snowman, snowball fighting etc. Now when I get up in winter I wondering: is my car going to start today or not (my diesel has big problem every morning when temperature is below -10 Celcius degrees). Sometimes I go to work by bus which is often delayed in winter. Because of short time when sun is on the sky, I seem to be at work all day. So in my opinion I'm to old to see winter as beautiful as in the past. I made today a snowman! And you?

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Winter

I'm not a big fan of winter. In As a matter of fact I don't like the cold. Snow and ice on my car always surprising surprises me when I'm late to work. And going out in winter is very time-consuming. This season has got a lot disadvantages, but it's beautiful (especially when snow is falling). My favorite activity is hiking all in the winter days, when snow is everywhere,the sun is shining and the frost is hard. I was rising on a farm in a picturesque region of Poland, so I used to walk thru frozen lakes and go home in a snow-covered forest. When I was a child, I thought that snow and frost was only for a month or two. Now snow is only for a week - I don't always have time to go for a walk and see how beautiful is world is in winter. Recently I had a disagreement regarding why now winter is shorter now. Is it due to the climate changing? Or maybe we have grown up? In the past we had a lot time for making a snowman snowmen, snowball fighting etc. Now, when I get up in winter I wondering: is my car going to start today or not (my diesel has a big problem every morning when the  temperature is below -10 Celcius degrees). Sometimes I go to work by bus which is often delayed in winter. Because of the short time when the sun is on in the sky, I seem to be at work all day. So in my opinion, I'm too old to see winter as beautiful as in the past.


I made today a snowman! And you?

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Winter

I'm not a big fan of winter. As a matter of fact I don't like the cold. Snow and ice on my car is always surprising me when I'm late to work [making me lat to work]. And going out in winter is very time-consuming. This season has got a lot disadvantages, but it's beautiful (especially when snow is falling). My favorite activity is hiking all on winter days, when snow is everywhere, the sun is shining and frost is hard. I was raised on a farm in a picturesque region of Poland, so I used to walk thru over a frozen lake and go home in though a snow-covered forest. When I was a child I thought that snow and frost was for month or two. Now snow is for a week - I don't always have time to go for a walk and see how beautiful is the world is in winter.

 

a. Recently I had a disagreement about why winter is now shorter.

b. Recently I had a disagreement as to why winter is now shorter.

c. Recently I had a disagreement as to why winter seems [to be] shorter.

 

Is it the climate changing? Or maybe we have just grown up? In past we had a lot time for making a snowman, snowball fighting etc. Now when I get up in winter I am wondering: is my car going to start today or not (my diesel has big problem every morning when temperature is below -10 Celcius degrees). Sometimes I go to work by bus which is often delayed in winter. Because of the short time when sun is on the sky, I seem to be at work all day. So in my opinion I'm too old to see winter as beautiful as in the past.


I made today a snowman! And you?

 

Today it is 21 C in Brisbane at 6:00am, even in winter it gets to down to 6-7 C coldest overnight, so it's comfortable most of the time just in light clothing. Your description makes me want to see how beautiful it is, but I dont think I would want to live in a really cold place even so. It's good that you took time to build a snowman and just enjoy life though.


Work on your definite articles (the snowman, a snowman etc).


 

 

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Winter

I'm not a big fan of winter. In As a matter of fact, I don't like cold. Snow and ice on my car always surprisesing me, when I'm making me late to for work, and going out in winter is very time-consuming.

This season has got a lot of disadvantages, but it's beautiful (especially when snow is falling). My favorite activity in the winter is hiking all winter days, when snow is everywhere, the sun is shining and the frost is hard.

I was raised/brought up rising on a farm in a picturesque region of Poland, so I used to walk across/[through] a frozen lake and to go home through/[in] the snow-covered forest. When I was a child, I thought that snow and frost was were for a month or two. Now, snow is for a week - I don't always have time to go for a walk, and to see how beautiful is the world in winter.

Recently, I had a discussion/debate/[disagreement] about why now winter now is shorter. Is it climate changeing? or maybe we have grown up? In the past, we had a lot of time for making a snowman, snowball fighting, etc. Now, when I get up in winter, I wondering: is my car going to start today or not (my diesel has a big problem every morning when the temperature is below -10 Celsius/degrees).

Sometimes I go to work by bus, which is often delayed in winter. Because of the short time when that the sun is on in the sky, I seem to be at work all day. So, in my opinion, I'm too old to see winter as beautiful as it was in the past.


Today I made today a snowman! - and you?

 

Isn't it wonderful to see things through a child's eyes ?  - if only we could hang on to this !

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