My first time

Yesterday, I made had my the first web Skype conversation with a new italki friend, it was so interesting and , so exciting!!!! I called from Italy and , he called from New Jersey!
So, I took a look about technology, today everything seems so normal but it isn't ...
People say a lot of bad things about the web but they don't understand what a powerful tool the web can be. the web powerful ...
I'm 53 years old and I remember the school research on paper encyclopedias, the difficulty of to calling each other: if something happened (car crash or , out of gas, for example) you had to find a phone booth, and you may not have had coins to use the pay phone. . And you had not phone token, sure. Now you have your smart phone, masterpiece handyphone so the web is in your hands: one second to find rescue, help or what you need!
I belong to another generation but I love technology so much, I love how so much the news is in the palm of your hand.
I belong to another generation, it's true, but I try to maintain the a young mind and heart and I wonder how(come "che cosa?) things were when I was a child.
So, I live at peace in current times, my current time, I don't regret my past but I love the future.
Am I too optimistic? too much optimist? I can't live any in other way.
Maybe my electronic watch ... has stopped!

Stefano Sergi
Livorno, Italy

Bravvissimo Stefano, solamente continua cosi. 

Se hai bisogno d'aiuto, solitanto dimmi e ti aiuterò con piacere. 

Buon Natale. 

My first time

Yesterday I made the had my first web conversation with a new italki friend, it was so interesting so and exciting!!!! I called from Italy, and he is from New Jersey!
So, I took a look some time to think about technology, and today everything seems so normal, but it isn't ...
People say a lot of bad things about the web but they don't understand how powerful the web is. powerful ...
I'm 53 years old and I remember the school research on in paper encyclopedias, the difficulty to call each other: if something happened (car crash, out of gas, for example, etc.) you had to find a phone booth. And you had not phone token, sure. (??? Not sure what you are trying to say here) Now you have your masterpiece wonderful handyphone smartphone, so the web is right in your hands. It only takes one second to find rescue, help or what whatever you need!
I belong to an other another generation, but I love technology so much. I love so much the news so much. 
I belong to an other older generation, it's true, but I try to maintain the young mind and heart and I wonder how when I was a child. (??? Not sure what you are trying to say here)
So I live at peace in my current time, I don't regret my past but I love the future.
Am I too much optimistic? I can't live in any other way.
Maybe my electronic watch ... has stopped!

Stefano Sergi
Livorno, Italy

Very nice job, Stefano! There were some small things that I corrected, but it was overall very good. If you have any questions about what I corrected, please feel free to ask!

My first time Fist Time

Yesterday, I made the had my first web Skype conversation with a new italki friend, it was so interesting, and so exciting!!!! I called from Italy, and he from New Jersey! 
So I took a look about technology, today everything seems so normal but it isn't ... 
People say a lot of bad things about the web but they don't understand the web powerful ...  what a powerful tool the web can be.

I'm 53 years old and I remember the school research on paper encyclopedias, the difficulty to call of calling each other: if something happened (car crash, or out of gas, for example) you had to find a phone booth, and you may not have had coins to use the pay phone. And you had not phone token, sure. Now you have your masterpiece handy phone smart phone, so the web is in your hands: one second to find rescue, help or what you need! 
I belong to another generation but I love technology so much, I love so much how the news is in the palm of your hand. 
I belong to another generation, it's true, but I try to maintain the a young mind and heart and I wonder how things were when I was a child. 
So I live at peace my current time in current times, I don't regret my past but I love the future. 
Am I too much optimist optimistic? I can't live in any other way. 
Maybe my electronic watch ... has stopped! 

Stefano Sergi 
Livorno, Italy

You did a pretty good job with this entry Stefano, I did correct several grammar mistakes and a few spelling mistakes. Please let me know if you have any questions; if you would like, I’d be happy to help you practice and improve your English skills, just let me know!