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Soccer
I love soccer. I learn learned about this sport from my father and I was growed plaing grew up playing soccer.
When I born indeed, my father waited that until I learn learned to walk, and put then immediatelly immediately put a ball near my foot feet!
I've played soccer belong more year when I was youngh more when I was younger, and I was a good player. I was canghed most role performed many roles on the team, but the best was the second striker.
I was very fast. Now I am fat and slowely slow, but I would like to play again.
Unfortunately, I have a weak ankle and I cannot will play again anymore.
I see the soccer on TV. I don't like to see watch all the games, but only those games that involve my favorite team: Naples.
This year I hope we win somethink something. The league is my dream.
We have a very good team, and I think my dream is possible.
The new coach was change changed the team module and this has improved results. Mr. Sarri (the name of the new coach) is proving that he is better as blasoned than the last coach Mr. Benitez.
He are the dimostration has demonstrated that the name is not are important, but that the good play is it good plays are important.
I was lived remember when Naples wins won two league leagues and a UEFA cup with the best ever player: Diego Maradona. But now, it is the moment time to win again. We wait too much time have waited too long for a win.
You did a good job on this essay Saverio, there were a few grammar mistakes I corrected, but overall you did a nice job! I too really like Italian soccer, but don’t know that much about it, nor do I see many of the games. Please let me know if you have any questions!
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