sacla's notebook entry: Feb 24, 2011

Wow, my notebook got corrected by a native!
What a wonderful system this is !!! so nice!!! It's what I needed!

By the way...
I'm going to Roma tomorrow!!!! yeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaahhh!!!!
that's the very first time to visit Europe! ("It's the first time I'm going to visit Europe" is also a good way to say it)
I can hear my heart beating towards it! (You don't have to add the "towards it", but it is possible)
I can't wait...!!
But I will stay in Roma for 3 days..just 3 days. (Instead of repeating, you can say "But I will only be staying in Roma for 3 days.")
I can't help thinking of coming back to dirty and noisy Tokyo after 3 days of dreams. (Adjectives are placed before a city, not after)
That will make me blue like a dead fish...



Anyways, hope this helped and that you indeed enjoyed Roma! ^-^

sacla's notebook entry: Feb 24, 2011

wow, my notebook got corrected by a native!
what a wonderfull system this is !!! so nice!!! that's what I needed!

by the way...
I'm going to Roma tomorrow!!!! yeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaahhh!!!!
that's the very first time to visit Europe! (It's my first trip to Europe = more natural) 
I can hear my heart beating towards it!
I can't wait...!!
but I will stay in Roma for 3 days..just 3 days.
I can't help thinking of coming back to dirty and noisy Tokyo after 3 days dreams.
that will make me blue like a dead fish...