Today's Diary : Dangerous!

Though I am taking a year off from college now, lately I am going to school nearly every day to help (actually to chat with) my friends with preparing prepare for their graduation exhibition, and today I heard about a scary incident which happened to one of my minor students a few days ago.
We often stay a the whole night at school or leave for home very late atnight when we have too many assignments. A freshman girl was walking towards a subway station near the school to go home at midnight, and suddenly a black van stopped near her. According to what she said, there were three guys in the van and one of them got out and started following her and tried talking to her. She got frightened and started running with all her strength, and heard them yelling, "Catch that girl!!" behind of her. We assume they were committing a kidnapping trying to kidnap her. Fortunately she could find found a nearby police station to ask for a help, but wow, that's dang scary!
I hope you don't misunderstand. I've been actually believing I actually believe Seoul is a very safe city in general, but the district where my university is located in is one of the least developed parts with a bad reputation (or ' parts which has a bad reputation'). I think if my school has at least one thing in common with Hogwarts, that it must be having all the dangers outside of the school fence. I've been thinking of about getting a flat near the school in the next year because it's tiring to use the subway for 1 hour to go to school everyday, but now I think maybe I should consider it some more.*

* For this sentence, it depends on nuance. If you mean that you will still probably do it (get a flat near the school), but have to think about it some more than as it is above is fine.
If you mean you've been thinking about it but now are close to changing your mind and not getting a flat near the school then you can use.
'but now I think maybe I should reconsider'

Today's Diary : A little anxiety

I have been going to school lately, after a long time away, to help my friends.
Most of my friends who were in the same class with as me for the past few years are going to graduate this winter. They are supposed to hold an exhibition so as to graduate and that requires a lot of work.
Seeing their work in progress and nearly done, first of all I was impressed for by the great quality and but I soon realized that they my friends are really leaving soon. When I look back upon the time they and I we spent together, I think it was always fun. Even though often we were tired of too many tasks, those moments like camping on the roof of the university building or wandering in the campus wearing pajamas will never be forgotten.
Because I took 2 years off in total in order to travel and study this and that, now I, personally, have one more year to study. It would have been great if I could spend my last year and graduate together with my friends, but I do not regret what I have done since I've learned a lot from those experiences. Just I am growing a little bit uneasy about spending the new semester with new students. I consider myself an affable person but it I will need to put in more effort to get along well with minor students, as sometimes minor students feel uncomfortable with senior students.

Key

Red = correction
Green = more natural