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Here's what I would say:
The last time I attended a wedding was five years ago. A son of my father's friend was getting married. He is also a friend to my brother and to myself because our parents introduced all of us during childhood. The marriage took place on a warm, sunny day in early September. It was perfect weather for a party. At mid-morning my family and I went to the Church for the ceremony. The Church was set out in the open, and flowers and satin ribbons adorned the surroundings. That was the first time I met the bride, and I found her wearing the traditional white wedding dress. The service took about an hour, and after that we all went to a restaurant by car. The place was huge as it had many rooms and also a beautiful garden with plants, trees, and fountains. There was a buffet waiting for the guests. The newlyweds themselves arrived late because they had been taking pictures all around the city, near the sea, or at the castle. They arrived after almost two hours, and then we were able to start the banquet. We ate for almost three hours. There were a lot of different dishes with meat, fish, or vegetables. Each table had a camera available so the guests could take pictures too. At dusk we returned to the garden to eat the wedding cake. Then they gave us sweets and finally we left. It was a long day, but a nice day, and one spent with friends.
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The last wedding I attented attended:
The last time I attended to a wedding, was five years ago. A son of my father's friend got married. He is also my brother's and I friend my friend, and a friend of my brother as well. We met this friend because our parents have made us meet introduced us when we were children. The day of the merriage marriage was sunny and warm, in early September. A It was nice weather perfect for a party. At mid-morning my family and I went to the church for the cerimony ceremony. The Church outside and outside outside of the church was adorned decorated with flowers and satin tapes. That was the first time I met the bride, she was wearing the traditional white dress. The function took about an hour and after that we all went to the restaurant by traveling by cars. The place was huge; it had many rooms and a beautiful garden with plants, trees and fauntains fountains. There was a buffet waiting for the guests, because the couple would arrive in late; they were taking pictures all around the city, near the sea, or the castle. They arrived after almost two hours, and then we could start the banquet. We ate for almost three hours a lot of different dishes made by with meat, fish, and vegetables. Each table had on a disposable camera, so the guests could take pictures too. At dusk, we returned to the garden to eat the cake. Then they gave us the the bombonniere boutonniere and finally we left. It was a long day, but was nice and spent with friends.
Not bad Elisa, you did a very nice job, I just noticed a few small grammar mistakes. Please let me know if you have any questions, I'd be happy to help you!
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