這個人長得什麽樣子？What does this person look like?

大家好。我的老師給我一門功課一份作业。這篇短文是我寫的。

我想形容谈谈我媽媽。我媽媽是一個胖子...我開玩笑的。其實，她長得又比較瘦，又比較矮个子一般高，比较瘦。她現在比幾個月前瘦很多（十公斤左右）。今年五十七歲，這麽很年輕。她在我工作的一座城堡工作，但是她的公司和我的公司不是一樣的。雖然她總是看我覺得沒意思的電視節目，但是我還是喜歡爱她。

我朗讀了這篇短文練習我的發音。請你們告訴我你的想法。

Hello everyone. My teacher gave me a piece of homework. This is what I have written.

I would like to talk about my mother. She is fat... I'm just kidding. Actually, she is fair tall and thin. At the moment she is much thinner than she was a few months ago (roughly ten kilos). She is 57 years young! She works in the same castle as me, but we work for different companies. Although she is always watching television programmes that I think are really boring, I still love her.

I read this article aloud to practise my pronunciation. Please tell me your opinions.

https://www.dropbox.com/s/xf81dd2uzlbutfi/What%20does%20this%20person%20look%20like.wav?dl=0

love=爱 aì

Like=喜欢 xi huān

Fair tall (average height?)=一般高

我想形容我媽媽：grammatically correct, but strange expression. Normally ppl don't say I want to describe my mom. You say I want to talk about my mom.

talk about=谈谈 tán tán／聊聊 liáo liáo

describe=形容 xíng róng

great job on both writing and pronunciation.:)

這個人長得什麽樣子？What does this person look like?

大家好。我的老師給我佈置了(直接說給了，從翻譯上來說沒錯，但是’佈置作業‘這個搭配，是上小學的時候老師開始這樣教的)一門功課一份(家庭)作業(homework is translated to '家庭作業' in China Mailland，but we often omit '家庭' and directly say '作業')。這篇短文(’短文‘ may be ,but not must be omitted)就是我寫的。

我想形容談談(or說說，’形容‘ is more like the word 'describe'，to talk sb or sth looks like)我媽媽。我媽媽是一個胖子...我是開玩笑的。其實，她長得又比較瘦比較高，又比較矮瘦(’矮‘ is short，’瘦‘ is thin.The two words are different in meaning)。她現在比幾個月前瘦了很多（十公斤左右）。今年五十七歲，挺年輕的吧。她在我工作的和我在同一座城堡工作，但是她的公司和我的公司不是一樣的我們是在不同的公司工作(我們(we) 為(for) 不同的公司(different companier)工作(work))。雖然她總是看我覺得沒意思的電視節目(在中文中，經常省略節目)，但是我還是(依然)喜歡她。

我朗讀了這篇短文來練習我的發音。請你們告訴我說說(原來的’你們告訴我‘，從語法和翻譯上來說沒有錯誤，但是不地道not natural or not authentic)你的想法看法('想法' is a little different from '看法'，'想法' is more like ’thought‘ while '看法' is more like 'opinion'.’想法‘ & 'thought' is that you get after deep thinking)。

Hello everyone. My teacher gave me a piece of homework. This is what I have written.

I would like to talk about my mother. She is fat... I'm just kidding. Actually, she is fair tall and thin. At the moment she is much thinner than she was a few months ago (roughly ten kilos). She is 57 years young! She works in the same castle as me, but we work for different companies. Although she is always watching television programmes that I think are really boring, I still love her.

I read this article aloud to practise my pronunciation. Please tell me your opinions.

https://www.dropbox.com/s/xf81dd2uzlbutfi/What%20does%20this%20person%20look%20like.wav?dl=0

PS:

用我認為在漢語里最自然的說法幫你修改的，其實你寫的已經很不錯了。

這個人長得什麽樣子？What does this person look like?

大家好。我的老師給我一門功課。這篇短文是我寫的。

我想形容我媽媽。我媽媽是一個胖子...我開玩笑的。其實，她長得又比較瘦，又比較矮。她現在比幾個月前瘦很多（十公斤左右）。今年五十七歲，很年輕。她在我工作的一座城堡工作，但是她的公司和我的公司不是一樣的。雖然她總是看我覺得沒意思的電視節目，但是我還是喜歡她。

我朗讀了這篇短文練習我的發音。請你們告訴我你的想法。

Hello everyone. My teacher gave me a piece of homework. This is what I have written.

I would like to talk about my mother. She is fat... I'm just kidding. Actually, she is fair tall and thin. At the moment she is much thinner than she was a few months ago (roughly ten kilos). She is 57 years young! She works in the same castle as me, but we work for different companies. Although she is always watching television programmes that I think are really boring, I still love her.

I read this article aloud to practise my pronunciation. Please tell me your opinions.

https://www.dropbox.com/s/xf81dd2uzlbutfi/What%20does%20this%20person%20look%20like.wav?dl=0

這個人長得什麽樣子？What does this person look like?

大家好。我的老師給我一門功課。這篇短文是我寫的。

我想形容一下我媽媽。我媽媽是一個胖子...我開玩笑的。

其實，她長得又比較瘦，又比較矮。其實，她長得偏瘦，又偏矮。

她現在比幾個月前瘦很多（十公斤左右）。今年五十七歲，這麽年輕。

她在我工作的一座城堡工作，她跟我在同一座城堡工作

但是她的公司和我的公司不是一樣的。雖然她總是看我覺得沒意思的電視節目，但是我還是喜歡她。 

我朗讀了這篇短文練習我的發音。請你們告訴我你的想法。 我覺得你寫得很口語很棒!

Hello everyone. My teacher gave me a piece of homework. This is what I have written.

I would like to talk about my mother. She is fat... I'm just kidding. Actually, she is fair tall and thin. At the moment she is much thinner than she was a few months ago (roughly ten kilos). She is 57 years young! She works in the same castle as me, but we work for different companies. Although she is always watching television programmes that I think are really boring, I still love her.

I read this article aloud to practise my pronunciation. Please tell me your opinions.

https://www.dropbox.com/s/xf81dd2uzlbutfi/What%20does%20this%20person%20look%20like.wav?dl=0

這個人長得什麽樣子？What does this person look like?

大家好。我的老師給我一門功課。這篇短文是我寫的。

我想形容我媽媽。我媽媽是一個胖子...我開玩笑的。其實，她長得比較瘦，比較高。她現在比幾個月前瘦很多（十公斤左右）。今年五十七歲，這麽年輕。她在我工作的一座城堡工作，但是她的公司和我的公司不是一樣的。雖然她總是看那些我覺得沒意思的電視節目，但是我還是喜歡她。

我朗讀了這篇短文練習我的發音。請你們告訴我你的想法。

Hello everyone. My teacher gave me a piece of homework. This is what I have written.

I would like to talk about my mother. She is fat... I'm just kidding. Actually, she is fair tall and thin. At the moment she is much thinner than she was a few months ago (roughly ten kilos). She is 57 years young! She works in the same castle as me, but we work for different companies. Although she is always watching television programmes that I think are really boring, I still love her.

I read this article aloud to practise my pronunciation. Please tell me your opinions.

https://www.dropbox.com/s/xf81dd2uzlbutfi/What%20does%20this%20person%20look%20like.wav?dl=0