在italki作文应该是短的是更好..为什么？继续读下面

在italki写短一点的作文更好...为什么?继续读下面

在italki作文应该是短的是更好..为什么？继续读下面

在italki写短一点的作文更好...为什么?继续读下面

(It's better if entries on italki are short...why? Keep reading)

我发现我如果写的短的嘴问有更多人像（要？）修改我写的字。

我发现当我写的作文比较短时,会有更多的人帮我改正错误.
I noticed that when I write shorter entries, there are more people who are willing to correct me.

我明白为什么。 除非你的作文没有很多要修改，如果你的作文有很多的要修改还是很长，我想别人要觉得很懒要修改。

我知道为什么这样,因为别人懒得去修改篇幅很长却又错误百出的作文,如果你的作文错误比较少,那就另当别论.
I understand why. Unless your entry doesn't require a lot of corrections, I think people feel lazy to correct if there are lot of mistakes and the entry is very long.

我以前经历过这样的，选哪个作文的时间我觉得这样的所以我明白。

我能理解因为当我选择英文作文修改时能感同身受.
I've experienced this myself when choosing English entries to correct, so I can understand.

我不是告诉你们不写多。 写很多的字更好对学语言，但是如果你要及时的修改，我的想法是最好写短小作文纸有些更多的反而写一个长的。

我并不是说不要多写,多写有助于学习一门语言.但是如果你想你的作文得到及时的修改,那么我认为最好不要一篇很长的作文,而是写短而多的作文比较好.
I'm not saying not to write a lot, writing a lot is good for language learning. But if you want corrections in a timely manner, I think it's best to write shorter entries but more of them instead of one long one.


short entry
Passion opens eyes
Learning words from other entries

在italki作文应该是短的是更好..为什么？继续读下面

在italki作文应该是短的是更好..为什么？继续读下面 (It's better if entries on italki are short...why? Keep reading)

我发现我如果写的短的嘴问会有更多人像（要？）来帮我（means to help me.）修改我写的字小作文（or 文章）。
I noticed that when I write shorter entries, there are more people who are willing to correct me.

我明白为什么。 除非你的作文没有很多要修改，如果你的作文有很多的错误（mistake）要修改还是而且很长，我想别人要觉得很懒要去修改。
I understand why. Unless your entry doesn't require a lot of corrections, I think people feel lazy to correct if there are lot of mistakes and the entry is very long.

我以前经历过这样的，当（when）选哪个作文去修改（to correct）的时间('时候'is better)我觉得这样的所以我明白。
I've experienced this myself when choosing English entries to correct, so I can understand.

我不是告诉你们不要写多。 写很多的字更好对学语言更好，但是如果你要及时的修改，我的想法是最好写短而多（but more）的小作文纸有些更多的反而写一个长的。 来代替（instead of ）一篇(one)很长(long)的小作文(one)。
I'm not saying not to write a lot, writing a lot is good for language learning. But if you want corrections in a timely manner, I think it's best to write shorter entries but more of them instead of one long one.


short entry
Passion opens eyes
Learning words from other entries