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It's my Self-Introduction! Hi, my name is Ted. I'm from Korea, I live in Seoul before 1 month. 안녕, 제 이름은 Ted에요. 저는 한국 출신이고, 저는 1달 전부터 서울에 살고 있어요 I was in Tokyo, Japan before 1 month, because I went to the university in Tokyo. 저는 1달 전까지 도쿄에 살았어요, 왜냐하면 저는 도쿄에 위치한 대학을 다녔거든요. And, I am 4th grades in university, and my major is Economics. But actually I don't like economics so, 저는 대학교 4학년이고, 제 전공은 경제학이에요. 그치만 경제학을 그리 좋아하지는 않아요. I am interested about experiencing various cultures in the world. 저는 사실, 전세계의 다양한 문화를 경험하는것에 더 관심이 있어요. That's why I'm learning English now, someday, I will travel the America, and making friends in there. 그래서 저는 지금 영어를 배우고 있고, 언젠가 저는 미국으로 여행을 가서, 현지에서 친구들도 사귈거에요. In the future, I will graduate the University in 2 years, I want to be a TV producer in Japan. 미래에는, 저는 2년뒤에 대학을 졸업하고, 일본에서 TV 프로듀서가 되고 싶어요. I really would love to be able to make TV program change the world more funny. 저는 세상을 좀 더 재밌게 만들 TV 프로그램을 만들 수 있게 되고싶어요. Thank you!

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It's my Self-Introduction!

Hi, my name is Ted. I'm from Korea, I am living in Seoul before since 1 month ago.
안녕, 제 이름은 Ted에요. 저는 한국 출신이고, 저는 1달 전부터 서울에 살고 있어요

I was in Tokyo, Japan before until 1 month ago, because I went to the university in Tokyo.
저는 1달 전까지 도쿄에 살았어요, 왜냐하면 저는 도쿄에 위치한 대학을 다녔거든요.

And, I am in my 4th grades year <아니면 "senior year" 더 자연스로운> in university, and my major is Economics. But actually I don't like economics, so... 
저는 대학교 4학년이고, 제 전공은 경제학이에요. 그치만 경제학을 그리 좋아하지는 않아요.

I am interested about in experiencing various cultures in of the world.

아니면 (직역): "The truth is, I am more interested in experiencing various cultures of the world.

저는 사실, 전세계의 다양한 문화를 경험하는것에 더 관심이 있어요.


That's why I'm learning English now. Someday, I will travel the to <미국내 within> America, and making make friends in there.
그래서 저는 지금 영어를 배우고 있고, 언젠가 저는 미국으로 여행을 가서, 현지에서 친구들도 사귈거에요.

맞아요: In the future, I will graduate the University in 2 years, I want to be a TV producer in Japan.

더 자연스로운: I will graduate university in 2 years and I want to become a TV producer in Japan.

미래에는, 저는 2년뒤에 대학을 졸업하고, 일본에서 TV 프로듀서가 되고 싶어요.

I really would love to be able to make a TV program to change the world into a more funny place.

저는 세상을 좀 더 재밌게 만들 TV 프로그램을 만들 수 있게 되고싶어요.

Thank you!

 

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안녕하세요! :D
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안녕, Leka~^0^! 만나서 반가워요! If you have any question about Korean, I could help you~!
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안녕! ^^
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It's my Self-Introduction!

Hi, my name is Ted. I'm from Korea, I live in Seoul before 1 month.

I was in Tokyo, Japan before 1 month, because I went to the university in Tokyo.

And, I am 4th grades in university, and my major is Economics. But actually I don't like economics so.

I am interested about experiencing various cultures in the world.

That's why I'm learning English now, someday, I will travel the America, and making friends in there.

In the future, I will graduate the University in 2 years, I want to be a TV producer in Japan.


I really would love to be able to make TV program change the world more funny.

Thank you!

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