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下雨在布诺斯艾利斯 下雨在布诺斯艾利斯。比平常在街上有少人。虽然天气预报预言了下雨,但是许多人离开家不准备的,没带伞雨或者雨衣。现在在屋顶下在人行道上些人等雨停了或者减少一下。别人就雨下走,他们做鬼脸。 至于我,我有一个伞雨,但是它不很帮助的。布诺斯艾利斯的人行道不好。我得小心别踩松动的砖,别水溅到我的裤子。我也得小心别我的伞雨和别的人的伞雨磕碰。其实很难的任务。 不管怎样,天气这么坏不要做什么。听下雨的时候,只要安静地睡觉或者看书,不要去办公室全日努力地工作。 This is more or less what I tried to wirte in Chinese (thanks in advance for your corrections): It is raining in Buenos Aires. There are less people than usual on the streets. Even though the forecast had predicted it, many people have not left their homes prepared for it and have not taken an umbrella or raincoat with them. Now some of them are waiting under roofs on the sidewalks for the rain to stop or at least drop a little. Others just walk through the rain making the faces people usually make when getting wet under the rain. As for me, I have got an umbrella. However, it does not prevent my feet from getting a bit wet. Sidewalks in Buenos Aires are not in the best condition so I have to be careful not to step on loose tiles and splash water on all over my trousers while I also try to avoid clashing my umbrella with those of the other pedestrians. It is certainly a difficult and annoying task. Anyway, the weather is awful enough to bring down your spirit and make you just want to be at home peacefully sleeping or reading a book while hearing the rain fall down, instead of going to the office and spend the rest of the day working hard.

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下雨在布宜诺斯艾利斯在下雨

下雨在布宜诺斯艾利斯在下雨。比平常在街上有少人的人比平常少。虽然天气预报预言了下雨,但是许多人离开家不做准备的,没带伞雨或者雨衣。现在有些人在屋顶下的人行道上些人等雨停了或者减少小一下。别人就雨下走,他们做鬼脸其他的人就只管在雨中走,脸色很糟糕。

至于我,我有一个伞雨雨伞,但是它不很没什么帮助的。布宜诺斯艾利斯的人行道不好。我得小心别踩松动的砖,别让水溅到我的裤子。我也得小心别让我的雨伞和别的人的雨伞磕碰。这其实很难的任务。 


不管怎样,天气这么坏不要做什么也不想做。听下雨的时候,只要只想安静地睡觉或者看书,这天剩下的时间不要想去办公室全日努力地工作。 

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布宜诺斯艾利斯在下雨(雨中的布宜诺斯艾利斯:i think it's better for a headline)

布宜诺斯艾利斯在下雨。街上的行人比平常少。虽然天气预报说会下雨,但是许多人没有准备就离开家了,他们没带雨伞或者雨衣。现在他们有些人正在人行道上的屋檐下等待雨停或者等雨下得小点儿。其他人冒雨行走,脸上的表情很糟糕。

至于我,我有一把雨伞,可是我的脚还是无可避免地湿了。布宜诺斯艾利斯的人行道不太好,所以我得小心别踩到松动的砖,以免让水溅到我整条裤子。我还得小心别让我的雨伞和别人的雨伞磕碰,这绝对是一件困难且烦人的任务。

不管怎样,这样的坏天气足以令人什么都不想做,只想静静地待在家听着雨睡个觉或读本书,而不是去上班并在努力工作中度过这天余下的时间。

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雨中的布诺斯艾利斯

雨中的布诺斯艾利斯,街上的人比平常少。虽然天气预报说会下雨,但是许多人离开家的时候还是毫无准备,他们不是没带雨伞就是没带雨衣。现在在屋檐下的人行道上有些人准备等雨停了或者小了再走,有些人就在雨中走,他们哭丧着脸。

至于我,我有一把雨伞,但是它没什么用。布诺斯艾利斯的人行道的状况不是很好。我得小心别踩到松动的砖,让水溅到我的裤子,我也得小心别让我的雨伞和别的人的雨伞磕碰。事实上这是一件很难的事。

不管怎样,天气这么坏不需要做什么。只需要听着雨安静地睡觉或者看书,不需要去办公室辛苦地工作一整天。 


This is more or less what I tried to wirte in Chinese (thanks in advance for your corrections):

It is raining in Buenos Aires. There are less people than usual on the streets. Even though the forecast had predicted it, many people have not left their homes prepared for it and have not taken an umbrella or raincoat with them. Now some of them are waiting under roofs on the sidewalks for the rain to stop or at least drop a little. Others just walk through the rain making the faces people usually make when getting wet under the rain.

As for me, I have got an umbrella. However, it does not prevent my feet from getting a bit wet. Sidewalks in Buenos Aires are not in the best condition so I have to be careful not to step on loose tiles and splash water on all over my trousers while I also try to avoid clashing my umbrella with those of the other pedestrians. It is certainly a difficult and annoying task.

Anyway, the weather is awful enough to bring down your spirit and make you just want to be at home peacefully sleeping or reading a book while hearing the rain fall down, instead of going to the office and spend the rest of the day working hard.

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布诺斯艾利斯在下雨(i think it's kind of like a status)。街上的人比平时少。虽然天气预报预言了下雨(though it sounds a little weird but there's nothing wrong with the grammar),但是许多人没有准备就离开了(usually 了means things already happened)家,没带雨伞(umbrella)或者雨衣。现在人行道的在屋顶下有些人在等雨停了或者小一些。有些人冒雨(means through the rain)行走(i have no idea how to express exactly what you are trying to say in chinese though i understand it. we don't really have that kind of expression)。

至于我,我有一把雨伞,但是我的脚还是无可避免(prevent)地湿了。布诺斯艾利斯的人行道很槽糕(we usually just say it's bad instead of it's not good),我得小心别踩松动的砖,别让水溅到我的裤子。我也得小心别我的雨伞和别的人的雨伞磕碰。这其实是一个很难的任务。

不管怎样,这么坏的天气让你什么都不想做,只想留在家里安静地睡觉或者伴着雨声(with the sound of raindrops)看书,而不是去办公室在剩下的时间里努力地工作。

This is more or less what I tried to wirte in Chinese (thanks in advance for your corrections):

It is raining in Buenos Aires. There are less people than usual on the streets. Even though the forecast had predicted it, many people have not left their homes prepared for it and have not taken an umbrella or raincoat with them. Now some of them are waiting under roofs on the sidewalks for the rain to stop or at least drop a little. Others just walk through the rain making the faces people usually make when getting wet under the rain.

As for me, I have got an umbrella. However, it does not prevent my feet from getting a bit wet. Sidewalks in Buenos Aires are not in the best condition so I have to be careful not to step on loose tiles and splash water on all over my trousers while I also try to avoid clashing my umbrella with those of the other pedestrians. It is certainly a difficult and annoying task.

Anyway, the weather is awful enough to bring down your spirit and make you just want to be at home peacefully sleeping or reading a book while hearing the rain fall down, instead of going to the office and spend the rest of the day working hard.

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很有意思。

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