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你好 - Hello 你好 我叫 贾里德。我是美国人。我二十八岁。 我是图书管理员。我刚开始研究中文。你好吗? 再见! I can only say a few phrases so far, but I will try to learn more- please let me know if I wrote anything incorrectly! 谢谢

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你好 - Hello

你好, 我叫 贾里德,来自美国,今年二十八岁,是一名图书管理员。我刚开始研究中文。你好吗?

再见!

I can only say a few phrases so far, but I will try to learn more- please let me know if I wrote anything incorrectly! 谢谢!

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你好 - Hello

你好 我叫 贾里德。我是美国人。,我今年二十八岁。 我是图书管理员。我刚开始研究中文。你好吗?

再见!

I can only say a few phrases so far, but I will try to learn more- please let me know if I wrote anything incorrectly! 谢谢

 

PS. Your Chinese is great!You've written a sentence correctly. But I suggest you may use "今年“ which stands for "this year". It is the native way to describe your age.  

By the way, I'm studying English all the time. I wish I can write and speak English fluently like you!

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你好 - Hello

你好 我叫 贾里德。

(你好,我叫贾里德。——In Chinese, we don't add a space between characters.)

我是美国人。

我二十八岁。

我是图书管理员。

我刚开始研究中文。

你好吗?

再见!

I can only say a few phrases so far, but I will try to learn more- please let me know if I wrote anything incorrectly! 谢谢

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