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Taking a chat hi,everybody ,this is my first english write,And I believe I will be write more and more.My favorite TV show is the big bang theory and friends.So I want to say which is better that the big bang theory or Friends.Jist a world I like sheldon very much.he always said bezinge

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Taking a chat

hi,everybody ,this is my first english write,And I believe I will be write more and more.My favorite TV show is the big bang theory and friends.So I want to say which is better that the big bang theory or Friends.Jist a world I like sheldon very much.he always said bezinge

 

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Hi, everybody. This is my first time writing in English, and I believe I will be writing more and more. My favorite TV shows are The Big Bang Theory and Friends. I want to say that The Big Bang Theory is better than Friends. I like Sheldon very much. He always says "bazinga".

 

***I'm unclear what you meant by the yellow sentence, so I changed it a little, but I'm not sure if it's what you wanted to say.


I just wanted to say that this is excellent work for your first time writing!! I also like watching Big Bang Theory and Friends too :)

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