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Hey, this is very well written! Great job.
My grammar corrections are in yellow. Words that I changed or added to make the sentence flow more naturally are in blue.
Talking literature (again)
I've recently just finished the novel "The Big Nowhere" by James Ellroy , translated as "Le Grand Nulle part" in French. It's without any (a) doubt the greatest Crime Fiction I've ever read. If you love the « Noir » genre, if you love a mystical character seeking redemption and tenderness, if you love Los Angeles and the fifties, then this novel if for you. It has it all: the style, the femme fatale, the « homme fatal » («fatal man », I know it sounds weird), everything is fatal in that novel, even the typography (at least in my edition. I've read it in french). The plot is fantastic and unpredictable, but I don't want to spoil it. I can just say that there's some tears and blood involved. James Ellroy is very fascinating; I've seen some interviews of him. The guy has charisma and a great sense of humor which is reflected in his work. I think "The Big Nowhere" is his masterpiece. I've also read his books "The Black Dahlia", "L.A Confidential", and "American Tabloids", which are all good, but "The Big Nowhere" just has something which sets it apart. It's a very magnetic book and is the compass of Crime Fiction novels.
With book titles, the rules vary. You can either write them in italics, example: The Big Nowhere, or you can write them with quotation marks, which is what I used for the corrections.
I don't really know what you mean by saying that the font is fatal, maybe there is another adjective you could use for that, like "dark" or "foreboding". Fatal means "causing destruction or death" or "fateful".
Also, I'm not really sure what you mean by saying that "The Big Nowhere" is the compass of Crime Fiction novels. Do you meant that is a leader in the genre or that it is an exemplary novel for the genre? If so, write that instead.
Like I said, this is very well written! Keep it up :D
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