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Writing a resume It's very hard. I think I'm not that passionate person. but every Corp want them for a new employee. and they required applicants of the many kinds of writing. somebody says it's a not resume but novel anyway I have to do it again... See you guys~

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Writing a resume

It's very hard. I think I'm not that passionate person. but every Corp want them for a new employee.

and they required applicants of the many kinds of writing.

somebody says it's a not resume but novel

anyway I have to do it again...

See you guys~


I know that you only intended to write a short note, but I think that you could make things clearer by restructuring your message:

Writing a resume

every Corp want them for a new employee. 

and they required applicants of the many kinds of writing.

It's very hard.

I think I'm not that passionate person. but 

somebody says it's a not resume but novel

anyway I have to do it again...

See you guys~


Now that we have a more logical structure, it is easier to edit the language.

Composing a Resume (Capitalise your title.)


Every corporation wants requires them a resume for from a new employees.
and They required applicants who are capable of the many kinds of writing.
(Can you explain and offer examples of the many kinds of writing?)
It's very hard challenging (What is challenging?  Why is it challenging?) 

I think I'm not that a passionate person.  but   (Is this related to the previous paragraph or a new idea that should have its own paragraph?)

Somebody says said that it's (To what are your referring?  The resume?  The writing? There corporation) a not resume but a novel.

Anyway, I have to do it (try to explain what you must do more clearly.) again...

See you guys~

I can understand the point you are trying to make despite a few small mistakes.  However, you should be careful when using articles (a/the) or pronouns (that / it etc).  If you use these incorrectly you can confuse your reader.

Good luck writing your resume! 

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