Practice Introduce.

Hi, my name is Meytal Cohen. I am from Tel Aviv. I work as an emergency nurse. I am trying to learn English so I can move to the USA. I have a job offer but need more English. When I no am not working I am watch American movies and listen to American music with a dictionary to learn. I like comedy and scary movies. I saw movie 'Neighbors.' I no didn't (or did not) understand much but it was still funny. I like Edward Sharpe and the Magnetic Zeros and Florence and the Machine. I like travelling. I visited Japan, Australia, Fiji, UK and Greece. I cannot wait to go to the USA. I want to see many things but the country is very big. My friend Avital lives in Chicago. I practice English with Avital and the doctors I work with but they have a hard time understanding me. Sometimes I no don't (or do not) understand what I said say. I stop to see if they understand, and if they don't, I keep going because I forget. I like krav maga, soccer, movies, books and American food like pizza.

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Practice Introduce. introduction.

Hi, my name is Meytal Cohen. I am from Tel Aviv. I work as an emergency nurse. I am trying to learn English so I can move to the USA. I have a job offer but need more better English. When I am not working I am watch American movies and listen to American music with using a dictionary to learn. I like comedy (comedies) and scary movies. I saw have seen the movie 'Neighbors.' I no don't understand much but it was still funny. I like Edward Sharpe and the Magnetic Zeros and Florence and the Machine. I like travelling. I have visited Japan, Australia, Fiji, UK and Greece. I can not wait to go to the USA. I want to see many things but the country is very big. My friend Avital lives in Chicago. I practice English with Avital and a doctor I at work but they have a hard time understanding me. Sometimes I they no don't understand what I say said. I stop to see if they understand and if they don't I keep on going because I forget. I like krav maga, soccer, movies, books and American food like pizza.

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Practice Introduce.

Hi(,) my name is Meytal Cohen. I am from Tel Aviv. I work (as an) emergency nurse. I am try(ing) to learn English so I can move to USA. I have job offer(,) but need (to learn) more English. When I no(x) (am not) work(ing) I am(x) watch American movies and listen to American music with  (a) dictionary to learn. I like comedy and scary movies. I saw movie 'Neighbors.' I (did) no(not) understand much but (it) was still funny. I like Edward Sharpe and the Magnetic Zeros and Florence and the Machine. I like travelling. I (have) visit(ed) Japan, Australia, Fiji, UK and Greece. I can not wait to go to USA. I want to see many things(,) but (the) country is very big. My friend(,) Avital(,) lives in Chicago. I practice English with Avital and doctor I work(with) but they (have a) hard time understanding me. Sometimes I no(don't) understand what I said. I stop to see if they understand and if they don't I keep going because I forget. I like krav maga, soccer, movies, books and American food like pizza.

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