This is not bad. The sentence structure is correct. Your only problem is your word choices.

这篇文章很不错。句子结构是正确的。唯一的问题是妳的单词的选择。

Do you notice all of your sentence have the same sentence pattern? 

妳注意到妳的所有英语的句子使用相同的句型吗？

譬如：

我一面有一个平常的周末，一面没有去上班。

Therefore, you need to use difference conjunction words

因此，妳应该使用不同的连词

A normal weekend

Today is Saturday, that just like a ho-hum (无聊) normal weekend as usual. (You do not need to write "normal" and also use "as usual") Because except, I do not have any a work shift today and but I do not have any outdoor activities plans planned either. So I spent almost the whole afternoon to sleep sleeping. After dinner, I came went to a botanical garden near my home but unfortunately it was closed. At that time I just noticed that it was already 7 o'clock and but this garden opens from 10 am to 5 pm daily. 

Although I could not get into this garden, I still had a glance at the beautiful view of it location's beauty. It is was not very big but quite
delicate picturesque. There are were lots of flowers and plants which I do not know their the names of them, (which even have fade (Do not understand this phrase). From what I know about flowers, though there are some flowers which are not particularly affected by changing seasons, most flowers of which bloom at the specific times of the year. So I definitely could not see these some flowers that were smiling must have already bloomed during only a few weeks of spring, and ones while other flowers bloomed in early summer. But I do not think it was too bad cause at least I saw their bodies instead. I was still disappointed I could enter into the garden but at least I had a view from the outside. :)

My friends, how do was your weekend like? What do did you do during your weekend? Do I hope you enjoyed it or you think more than your weekdays. are better? :p

A Normal Weekend

Today is Saturday, that just like any other normal weekend as usual. Because Since I do not have any work shift today and so there was any no outdoor activity planned either. So Instead, I spent almost the whole afternoon to sleeping. After dinner, I came went to a botanical garden near my home but unfortunately it was closed. At that time I had just noticed that it was already 7 o'clock and this garden's hours of operation is  opens from 10 am to 5 pm daily.

Although I could not get into the garden, I was still had a glance able to peer into/at its beauty.at the beautiful view of it. It The garden is not very big but quite delicate. There are lots plenty of flowers blooming and and many other plants which I do not know. their name, which even have fade. ??? From what I know, although there are the bloom of some flowers is not particularly affected by the changing seasons. [There are called year-long bloomers, like the potato vine, Solanum jasminoides) Most flowers bloom at the specific times of the year. So As such I definitely could not see these flowers that were smiling during only a few weeks of spring, and ones bloom in early summer I missed all those spring and early summer blooming plants. But I do not think it was too bad cause at least I saw their bodies instead. ??? 不明你想要說什么? 若要正确修改請留句中文]

My friends, how do is your weekend like? What do you do during weekends? Do you enjoy it them or you think prefer weekdays are better? :p

Not bad at all.  You have your basics on solid ground.  However, the road ahead is still long.