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It is difficult to get well along with my father.
When I [非大寫不可, 英文讀者定認為你是條懶惰蟲或是一个沒有自重的人!]was a little child, , my father was busy at work. , We seldom see each othermet. when As Ii was growing up, he is not that busy. had more free time but everytime we are together, get alone with I would feel ill at easeuncomfortable. We seldom talk with each other. , Even though he is not good at expressing his feelings, I always think he is does not care about me. He seldom [因為不久之前, 你用了這句] rarely asks me about my school life, my friends, on what my decide of something important decisions I made and so on. I am a girl and sometimes I think believe that he always treats me as a guy. He never worries about me when i outside I go out and be late to come back coming home. by the way i Yes, I have a lots plenty of freedom to deside what I want. ,to choice what i like ,but However, when I see others' fathers take care of treat their daughters like a baby princess, sadness would become my companion. i would feel sad. [做人難, 給你自由, 就說不关懷, 但當有关懷時就說管束. 真是天下父母心]I love my dad so so very very much. ,He is strong and a filial son. He he is fealty...??? [from your comments]gives me an easy life,_but in all honesty, he is really not good at get alone with his children. . and I don't known how what to do. [跟他說出心中話, 好像你這样告訴我们. 不要像剧中重重誤会 為了避免尷尬就真言不出, 是大大錯]
English is not my native language, but I will try my best to correct and make the whole passage sounds smoother.
It is difficult to get well alone along with my father. (get along = have smooth relations)
When i was a little child, my father was busy at work, and we seldom met. When I grew up, he is not that busy anymore, but everytime we get alone together with I would feel uncomfortable. We seldom talk with to each other, though and he is not good at expressing feelings. I always think he is does not care about me. He seldom ask me about my school life, my friends or my decide of something important decision on important things and so on. I am a girl but sometimes i think (or maybe feel) he always treats me as a guy boy. He never worry about me when i outside and late to come back home I go out and come back home late. By the way, I have a lots of freedom to decide what i want ,to choice what i like and make my own choices, but when I see others' father take care of their daughter like a baby, I would feel sad. I love my dad so so much, he is strong he is fealty and healthy/wealthy (你是要说你父亲很健康还是很富有呢?). He gives (or maybe provides) me an easy life, but in honest honestly he is really not good at get alone getting along with his children, and I don't know how what to do.
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