翻译好不好？

在暴风大雨后的一个天早晨，有一个男儿在人来到海边上散步。他看到沙滩的 一浅水洼里，有许多被暴风雨卷上岸来的小鱼。它们被困在浅水洼里，数量有几百条，甚至几千条[This is not in your original, clear violation of translation tenents] 。有些是白色的, 有些比較暗色的. [艾秀's is the best and most natural translation]不久，浅水洼里得的水就会被沙粒吸干，被太阳晒正干，小鱼们就都会干死了。

One day in the early morning after a stormy night a little boy walked down to the seashore. In a little hole in sand filled with water he saw many little fish that had been deposited there by the storm. They were trapped in the little pool, there were a few white ones and a few dark ones. Soon the water in the little pool would dry up in the sun, all of the little fish would die.

Not bad at all but need to pay attention not to add extra or subtract any from the original. In translation classes, major points will be deducted for inaccuracy.

在暴风雨后的一天早晨，一个小男孩来到海边上散步。他看到沙滩的浅水洼里，有许多被暴风雨卷上岸来的小鱼。它们被困在浅水洼里，有的鱼儿是白色，有的（鱼儿）是黑色。不久，浅水洼里的水就会在太阳下干涸，所有的小鱼都会干死。 

Just my humble opinion,hope it works~

翻译好不好？

在暴风雨后的一天早晨，一个男人小男孩来到海边上散步。他看到沙滩的浅水洼里，有许多被暴风雨卷上岸来的小鱼。它们被困在浅水洼里，数量有几百条，甚至几千条或明或暗。不久，很快浅水洼里得水就会被沙粒吸干，被太阳正烤干，小鱼们都会干死去。

One day in the early morning after a stormy night a little boy walked down to the seashore. In a little hole in sand filled with water he saw many little fish that had been deposited there by the storm. They were trapped in the little pool, there were a few white ones and a few dark ones. Soon the water in the little pool would dry up in the sun, all of the little fish would die.