Around the world
l have to brought my dream for long time.
lt's around the world.Acutualy,l have to tought that l would like to realize a it from this winter.
Because l'm going to become 30 years old on August.l would like to change my life on this chance.But l have many problem that l must overcome.1st,l will must say it my parents and my company.2nd,l will must be able to speak English better.3rd,l will must gather a lot of money.l have anything other problem.
l will do my best.
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Around the world
l have to brought thought about my dream for long time.
lt's to travel around the world. Acutually, l have decided to tought that l would like to realize a it from this winter.
Because l'm going to become 30 years old on in August, l would like to use it as an opportunity to change my life on this chance. But l have many problems that l must overcome. 1st, l will must tell say it my parents and my company. 2nd, l will must be able to speak English better. 3rd,l will must gather save up a lot of money. l have anything other problem. (sorry, I'm not sure what you mean here)
l will do my best.
I hope you manage to realize your dream. Travelling the world is a beautiful thing.
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Hi sorry do you mind if you type this out in Japanese as well? In some places I'm not entirely sure what you want to say, and with my understanding of Japanese it would make this easier for me to correct
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