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yige redai dao Redai dao shi ni gandao ziyou. hai shi ni nao. wenzi, shuimuti, ling, redai dao jingli de yiqie gongxian ziji de yifen liliang. "Koh Kood" hen ningjing, wanshang shenme ye mei you de gan. Zuotian wanshang women chi zhencan le, ershi dian sishiba fen shang chuang shuijiao le. Xianzai si dian ershiwu fen zaoshang wo zhengzai xie zhe pian wenzhang. Zhege dao shang feichang mei de haitan you, tongchang hai shui hen qingjie, chule shangge xingqi dou. Si nian qian shanhujiao mei you, danshi xianzai yidian yidian de zhengzai zengzhang, suoyou de nian women bianhua kan de dong, gen xin yu zai shanhujiao zhu de lai. Danshi zhege xinqi tianqi bu hen qing, changchang yin tian, chaoshui hen gao, botao xiongyong de haimian he shui bu qing. Suoyi women yao likai ye qu andaman de hai'an. Ok, I think I might have aimed a bit high, this time. I won't be surprised if the corrections will be a massacre. I have sprinkled a few "de", see if it works. Here is the English version, it might clarify certain points: A tropical island makes you feel free. It also makes you scratch. Mosquitoes, jellyfish, sandflies, all contribute to the tropical experience. Koh Kood is very quiet, in the evening there is nothing to do. yesterday evening we had dinner and went to ben at 20.48. I'm writing this essay at 4.25 am! On this island there are extremely beautiful beaches, and usually the water is very clear, except for this week. Four years ago there was no coral, but it's growing back again, little by little, and every year we can see it change, and new fish inhabiting it. But this week the weather is not good, often cloudy, the sea-tide is high, the sea is rough and visibility is no good. So, we'll leave and go to the Andaman coast.

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yige redai dao

Redai dao shi ni gandao ziyou. hai shi ni nao.wenzi, shuimuti, ling(), wei redai dao jingli de yiqie gongxian ziji de yifen liliang.
"Koh Kood" hen ningjing, wanshang shenme ye mei you de gan（mei you shen me ke gan ）. Zuotian wanshang women chi zhencan le, ershi dian sishiba fen shang chuang shuijiao le. Xianzai si dian ershiwu fen zaoshang（zao shang si dian er shi wu fen.Chinese say am or pm first） wo zhengzai xie zhe pian wenzhang.
Zhege dao shang you feichang mei de haitan you, tongchang hai shui hen qingjie（qing che 清澈。qingjie used after stuff like furniture，water use “qing che”，all kinds of water，seas，lakes，or the water we drink， we say “qingche”）, chule shangge xingqi dou.Si nian qian shanhujiao mei you（mei you shan hu jiao）, danshi xianzai yidian yidian de zhengzai zengzhang, suoyou de nian(mei yi nian. means every year)  women bianhua kan de dong(dou kan de dao bian hua."dou" is an auxiliary Verb ), gen xin yu zai shanhujiao zhu de lai(qi xi 栖息 means inhabit，only use for animals)----this sentence “ you you yu zai shanhujiao qixi le。the first “you又" means “again”，the second “you有" means “have”，we can not translate “new fish” into “xin yu”，“xin” in chinese only use the things we buy not for a long time. Here you means fish come back again,so we can say "you you yu zai shanhujiao qixi le" . Danshi zhege xinqi tianqi bu shi hen qing, changchang yin tian, chaoshui hen gao, botao xiongyong de haimian he shui(if you mean seawater,you should say "hai shui". "he shui" means the water in the river,he means river ) bu qing---this sentence you mean"visibility is no good. ",you can also say "shi xian bu hao."shi xian means "a line of sight" . Suoyi women yao likai ye qu andaman de hai'an le.





welldone~and forgive my poor english.   hope you can understand what I mean.
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Thank you guys and girls! You are being so helpful!!!
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I have a suggest to you.every chinese character's ping yin should be separate,otherwise,people difficult to read it. such as Redai dao ===> Re dai dao I understand, and I'll do my best, but as I don't know characters, it's difficult whan I have words from a dictionary.
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yige redai daoyu

Redai daoyu shi ni gandao rang ren ganjue ziyou. hai shi ni nao ye hui rang ren jue de hen yang. wenzi, shuimu ti,bai ling, redai dao jingli de yiqie gongxian ziji de yifen liliang ni dou hui zai re dai dao shang jingli
"Koh Kood" hen ningjing, wanshang shenme ye mei you de gan meiyou shenme shiqing keyi zuo. Zuotian wanshang women chi zhencan le chi guo wanfan, ershi dian sishiba fen shang chuang shuijiao le. Xianzai zaoshang si dian ershiwu fen zaoshang wo zhengzai xie zhe pian wenzhang.
Zhege dao shang you(object +verb) feichang mei de haitan you, tongchang hai shui hen qingjieche(qingjie means clean, while qingche means clear), chule shangge zhege(shangge means last, zhege means this, xiage means next)xingqi dou(xingqi means week).

Si nian qian zheli (means there, object usually followed with verb, so use "meiyou" next)mei you shanhujiao mei you, danshi xianzai yidian yidian de zhengzai zengzhang, suoyou de mei(suoyou means all, mei means every) nian women shanhu de bianhua (it's the change of coral, not the change of us, so it's shanhu de bian hua)kan de dong dao ( kan de dong means we can understand, kan de dao means we can see), gen xinde(means new) yu zai shanhujiao zhu de xia (zhu xia means settle down, xia is down) lai.
 
Danshi zhege xinqi tianqi bu hao(bu hao means not good, bu qing means not clear, bu means not, qing means clear, and qing usually used with other word, like qingche, qingchu) hen qing , changchang shi yin tian, chaoshui hen gao, botao xiongyong(this word is good, it's an idiom) de haimian shen me dou kan bu qing chu he shui bu qing. Suoyi women yao likai ye qu andaman de hai'an.

I want to explain some words.
he(river) shui(water), it means the water in the river.
hai(sea) shui(water), it means the water in the sea.

qing usually is not used alone. It should be followed with another word.
qingche, it means water is very clear.
qingchu, it cannot be used to describe water. We can say "what he want to do is not clear",“wo men bu qingchu ta(he) xiang(want) zuo(do) shenme(want)".
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yige redai daoyu

Redai daoyu (or zai redai de dao shang) shi ni gandao ziyou. hai ye shi ni gandao fannao nao. wenzi, shuimuti, ling, dou wei redai dao shang de jingli de yiqie gongxian le ziji de yifen liliang. (The sentence is very advanced and literary. In colloquial Chinese it can be like this: wenzi, shuimu, ling, doushi redai dao shang de jingli)
"Koh Kood" hen ningjing, wanshang shenme ye gan bu liao mei you de gan. Zuotian wanshang women chi le wanfan zhencan le, ershi dian sishiba fen shang chuang shuijiao le. Xianzai shi zaoshang si dian ershiwu fen. zaoshang wo zhengzai xie zhe pian wenzhang.
Zhege dao shang you feichang mei de haitan you, tongchang hai shui hen qingjie qingche (qingjie means something is hygienic), chule shangge zhege xingqi dou.
Si nian qian zheli meiyou shanhujiao mei you, danshi xianzai tamen (or "shanhujiao") zhengzai yidian yidian de zhengzai zengzhang chengzhang, suoyou de mei nian women dou kan de dao bianhua kan de dong, gen (in chinese the word "and" is not used to connect two sentences) xin de yu zai shanhujiao li zhu de xia lai. Danshi zhege xinqi tianqi bu tai hao hen qing, changchang yin tian, chaoshui hen gao (or "hailang hen da"), hai mian shang botao xiongyong. de haimian (botao xiongyong is so literary :P) he (you can not use "and" to connect phrases either) Haishui shui kan bu qing. Suoyi women yao likai le ("le" indicates the change of state so you can totally use it in future tense and you should), ye ranhou qu andaman de hai'an (no "de" in a proper noun).

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